A/N:
This is my first fan-fiction so please only constructive criticism not hate. I tried really hard on this, and I know I'm not the best writer but i do write quite a lot.
"Beatrice get up now" Caleb screamed through my door.
"I'm up" I looked at my phone to see what time it was. 8:30, plenty enough time to get ready. I went to my closet and picked out my clothes then I headed to my bathroom to get ready.
I threw on my outfit then put on minimal makeup, with my hair down but a hair tie on my wrist just in case.
Once I finished getting ready I headed out to my car and drove off.
I'm new at Dauntless High; I just finished 9th grade last year. So I'm excited to see Christina still here.
"Tris" Christina ran up to me as I just got out of my car
"Hey"
"Come on, Uriah goes here"
Christina dragged me into the school towards Uriah and a group of people
"TRISSY!" Uriah ran up to me
"I missed you too Uriah" you laughed
"Oh Tris this is Zeke my brother, and his friend Four, along with Lauren and then you should know the rest"
"Yes Uriah, I do know the rest" I smiled
"Well me and Tris are going to go" Christina announced
When we were a good distance away Christina bombarded me with questions.
"Did you see Four? Do you like him? Isn't he hot? Did you see how he was looking at you? "
"Christina, shut up, and yes I saw him and I may like him"
"OMG Tris, I need to hook you guys up"
"And I need to get to class" I retorted
I walked into the class and sat near the back, because who really like the front? Not me.
"Hey, it's Tris right?"
"Yes"
"You're in AP English?"
"Yeah, I'm kind of a little smart, I spend a lot of time near my brother."
"Cool" just then the teacher walked in
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