Hi everyone this is my first fanfic and it's a oneshot, so please don't judge me too harshly. I might continue it if I get enough people wanting me to continue it.
Leaving me
Naruto lay in the middle of the training grounds, blood on his bare chest and small tears in his black shinobi pants. The whole training ground was a wreck. Trees broken and burnt to nothing but ashes, the flowers crushed and dug out of the ground, the grass on fire and smoke rising up into the sky. Any insects, dead because they couldn't get out of the way of his anger fast enough. The place was destroyed. Naruto's chest was heaving and slowly, tears began to trickle down his face as he silently cried.
He was on his back, his arms spread at his side as he looked up into the sky wondering why Kami hated him so much.
Why?
Why did she have to go?
Why did she have to go to him?
Why did she have to go to him and leave me all alone.
Broken
That's what I am
I'm broken
She was the glue that held me together but then she left
Left to hold him together
Please don't go
I love you
I'll do anything but please don't go
Don't leave me
Tenten-chan….
Don't leave me
Don't go to Neji
I'll do anything just please
Don't go
Tenten-chan….
DON'T GO!
A broken sob broke through his throat and he started to openly sob.
He wailed, he cried, he screamed, he howled.
But nobody came, and eventually he fell asleep, alone in a training ground, as his love was with another, in his arms, in his bed, in his house.
Thank you sooooo much! This is my first fanfiction so I hope you all liked it and could I get some constructive criticism so I can write better and make better stories. Also no flames that flame me for no reason, and if you want to flame me get an account so we could talk privately and you can tell me what you don't like and what you would like. i might do an actual story about this so if you want to see more just tell me!
Thanks
Nosyniki