I loved him with all my heart, and he said loved me too, but eventually, I was left standing in the rain with tears stained cheeks, and a broken heart that could never be fixed. I'd like to believe that he did love me, but he had a change of heart. It's hard, though. How did I go from the girl he was madly in love with to the girl I am now? I know this is wrong, but don't be so quick to judge. It's easy to say that what I'm doing is horrible, sinful behavior, but when it comes down to it, what would you do in my position? When I look in the mirror I see nothing but a thoughtless, selfish, relationship ruiner and I know I have to do the right thing, but then I see him and even though my mind is screaming out "STOP, YOU CAN RESIST HIM," my heart says otherwise. I can't resist. I'm on a diet and he's that forbidden piece of chocolate sitting in front of me, taunting me, telling me to do it, and I'm so vulnerable that I swallow the sweet lies being whispered in my ear and indulge. At first, I have no regrets, but later the sweet sin is just a memory I can no longer taste then suddenly, remorse, guilt, and deprivation consume my body. I don't want it to be like this, I don't understand it. What happened? How did I go from the only girl to the other girl?
Okay, so I know that I just started a story and I should probably wait to do yet, another one, but this idea just came to me and I kind of liked it.
In all honesty, I want to know what you guys think.
Please review? It really doesn't take that much time to do. I'm not asking for a professional review that's like a paragraph long. Just say whether you like it or not, and if you don't just a few ways I can improve.
I'll continue this story based on the reviews I get.
And to those of you who are reviewing my stories, thank you. It means a lot to me. I like knowing the quality of my writing.
That's it. I'm done, now. Ha.
-xoxo Tori