Real love

by White fox XD

The war did not happen and Tobias and Tris have been training initiates for five years, but what will happen when Tobias snaps and almost kills on of the new initiates. I know that this whole no war thing is over used, but this is my first fanfic and i will try to be original. Also rated T just to be safe . So read it... PLEASE WITH DAUNTLESS CAKE ON TOP :P :D

1. Chapter 1

A/N: Hey here goes is my first fanfic I hope you like it. Also I am not lucky enough to have the writing skills of Veronica Roth so I don't own divergent, its chacters, or its plot. Enjoy! :P

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Chapter 1 Nightmare

Tris (POV)

"TRIS," the voice that I hear sound familiar, but I can't tell where it is coming from, then I hear it again "TRIS". That's when I notice its Tobias. I look around to find him, but all that I see is trees, "TOBIAS" I shout as I bolt in the direction of the voice, tripping and stumbling over thick roots. Still shouting, I can't find him. Now my cheeks are raw from the tears streaming down my face

"Tris, its okay I'm right here, I've got you. Your okay." Tobias whispers calmly to me. I have a death grip on his shirt that is starting to lighten up along with my crying. "Would you like to tell me what it was about this time." Tobias whispers into my ear.

"I-I was in a f-forest and you were calling me name, but I-I couldn't get to you," I say trying not to sob.

"Well I'm right here and I'm not going anywhere without you, alright." Tobias comfortingly whispers into my ear, right before kissing my forehead. Then he jokingly says, "Ready to go scare some initiates today."

I look at the clock and see that its 6:30, and give Tobias a quick kiss before heading to the shower to go get ready.

Tobias (POV)

"Are you ready to go to breakfast?" I ask Tris as I look at the clock and see that it's already 7:35, how does she take so long to get ready in the morn-. I'm stopped mid thought as I see Tris step out of the bathroom looking stunning. That when I realize that I have been staring for too long.

"What?" she asks looking confused and slightly annoyed.

"Nothing it's just that you look amazing," and she really does.

"Sure I do," she says sarcastically while rolling her eyes. "How about we head down to breakfast now." She then takes my hand and we go down to breakfast together.

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A/N: So what do you think, should I scrap it or continue? Also don't forget to review (criticism is accepted as long as it's constructive and not destructive). If I get 5 reviews I will try to update by Friday night, for the readers out there who live in a different time zone it will be about 55 hours from now. Ps. Sorry for any spelling errors. :P