Hey it sweetie-san. So here is the newest version or whatever you want to call it of chapter 1. It still the same theme, but I just change somethings and my horrible grammar. So enjoy
Locked
By Sweetiespring
It was a hot day in Konoha. Half of the ninjas had the day off, but they were bored to hell and outside felt hot too. Poor hyper blond named Naruto Uzumaki, was trying to think of a way to fight the fuckin boredom. Then he had a great idea, to have a party tonight and invite everyone. Naruto was so excited; he grabbed pieces of paper, a pen, and made his invitation.
He rushes out of his home in search for his friends. He met up with Ino Yamanaka at the Yamanaka Flower Shop, Choji Akimichi at Ichiraku Ramen Shop, and Shikamaru Nara with Asuma Sensei. He gave them the invitation and all three said yes.
Next he found Kiba Inuzuka with Akamaru, Hinata Hyuga, and Shino Aburame coming back from a mission. Naruto walked up to them and gave them the invitations. They all said yes as well. Later he found Neji Hyuga, Rock Lee, and Tenten at the training grounds, walked up, gives the invitation, and all said yes.
Then Naruto found Sakura Haruno walking to her house. Naruto wanted her to come the most because of his big crush on her since they were in the academy together. He walked up to her.
"Sup Sakura," said Naruto happily.
"What do you want?" said Sakura.
"O, um will I'm having a party tonight and I was wondering if you can come."
"Sure, I'll go unless Sasuke-kun is going to be there."
He HAD to invite that teme to his party if Sakura is going to come. That the only way she will ever come to his party if the fuckin emo boy going to be there. He sighs and nodded his head in defeat. Sakura jumped happily, grabbed her invitation, and ran home. Now Naruto had to find that teme to give him his in invitation. Naruto ran all over the village and finally found Sasuke Uchiha under a tree eating a tomato. Naruto runs towards him and throw the invitation to him in the other boy face. Sasuke stared at him and stood up.
"What the hell is this, you idiot," said Sasuke.
"It invitation to my party tonight," said Naruto.
"Who says that I want to come, dumbass?"
"Just come teme."
"Fine, what time."
"O at 9 o'clock."
"o.k., see you later."
Naruto walked away with a confuse face. Why didn't Sasuke, the number one student, pull up a fight? As he walked away, the black hair looked at the blonde's fine around ass. Sasuke started loving that dumbass since that fight with Haku and kept a secret for so long. Sasuke knew that this was his chance to have Naruto wrap around his sexy finger and have hardcore sex with him. Sasuke had a big smirk in his face and walked home.
I hope you like this new version better. Tell me if it better or not, but if your new this please review. Thanx for reading
Sweetie-san