Hi! Kari here. well, I did this story when I was in 5th grade or so and I decided to post it to see if it really was that great enough to get an A++. This is short, shorter than the other books made by Brian Jacques, but remember, this is old! Anyway, enjoy, and please review, crticism is always accepted.
Disclaimer: I do not own the Redwall series for this fabulous series belongs to Brain Jacques himself
Prologue
I am the youngest creature ever put in the position of Recorder of Redwall, exactly one season younger than Melanda Macburl. Oh, I almost forgot, my name is FlowerBreeze or Flore for short. I have just finished recording the tale of Lord Swordpaw's quest. It is now the end of spring and summer shall be with us once more. The fruit in the orchard have grown somewhat extra amounts than the original harvest last summer. Right now the dibbuns are playing in the orchard with the new Badgermum, Tara.
My narrative of Lord Swordpaw was going to be placed in the abbey's archives until a babe named Thimbo asked if the whole abbey could hear the story. The abbot placed the time when I would be reading, and it was right before the feast! I am now needed in Great Hall, also under the tapestry of Martin the Warrior there is a copy of my narrative. Please get it before the creatures of Redwall run you over! You may take this copy of my manuscript and head out to the gatehouse where I have set a chair out for you to read in. I have not judged this book by any circumstances for I have not read my own work. Even the creatures of Redwall are waiting to hear my story. I should make this quick because I hear some abbeybabes yelling my name. I shall now let you read and decide if my manuscript is the best or the worse. I now leave you to read on and judge for yourselves, my friends.
Flore,
Recorder of Redwall Abbey
In
Mossflower Country
Please read the beginning, I don't want to repeat myself. O.K., what else...oh! The chapters are split into Books (Book 1, Book 2, etc.) If this story turns out to be good I'll actually make it according to the way Mr. Jacques does it.