Returning Home
In this fanfic Marisa did NOT die. She left on the boat with her dad. She may or may not be coming back into the story. Summer is at Brown (she is not like the person in season 4, she's still the old summer that is into gossip and fashion. Ryan decided not to go to Berkley and Seth works at the comic store and will be going to Brown the next fall. (Very similar to the show).
I was just wondering if you want it in dialogue form? I think it's easier.
I did the first chapter like that.
4x01
Cohen's kitchen
Kirsten: Do you think he'll ever decide to go back to Berkley? He's been miserable ever since he left Marissa at the airport
Sandy: I know, but we can't do anything. We just have to let him deal.
Kirsten: How long is it going to take to deal sandy? He's been miserable for almost three months now. College already started. They won't admit him now. Is he just going to be like this until next year? I'm not going to stand here and watch him throw his education away over some girl.
Ryan: She's not some girl
Sandy: Ryan, we didn't see you enter.
Kirsten: I know she's not some girl but you have to move on.
Ryan: I need to talk to Seth
Sandy: He's at the comic book shop
Ryan leaves the kitchen
Sandy: I tell ya, the timing in this place, it's impeccable
Comic Book Store
Seth: Taylor, how many times do I have to tell you, I'm not interested in any sexual favors!
Seth: Ryan, how kind of you to join us (Ryan enters). I'm just going to go see if we have the new X-men movie.
Ryan: But...fine. So Taylor, why are you here again?
Taylor: Well I just need to convince your brother that we're perfect for each other.
Ryan: Taylor, you're a great girl. But I don't think you're Seth's type.
Taylor: Thanks Ryan
Ryan: Now can you leave so Seth can get out of the closet?
Taylor: Sure thing. See you tomorrow Ryan
Ryan shakes his head and goes and knocks on the closet door
Ryan: she's gone
Seth: are you sure?
Ryan: yes
Seth gets out of the closet.
Ryan: I don't get why you are so scared of Taylor Townsend. I mean she's just a girl. What harm could she do?
Seth: Don't you understand?
Ryan: Um...no
Seth: This is the girl that almost completely ruined my relationship with Summer. The girl that locked you two out of the lock-in. The girl that confiscated my phone at the lock-in. This is the girl that tried to replace Marissa…. I'm sorry. I shouldn't have said that.
Ryan (looks at his feet): It's fine
Seth: I was on a roll though. Um….Do you talk to her anymore?
Ryan: We did, but it just seemed to make it harder. So one day we just stopped.
Seth: Do you still love her?
Ryan: Seth!
Seth: I will take that as a yes
Ryan: Take it as a shut up.
Seth: Wow, someone's not chipper this morning
Ryan: Seth, please don't start with that.
Seth: Fine. Now I've got to go and help a customer and then call my lady
Ryan: Which one? Summer or Taylor?
Seth: Hey look at that. Ryan's funny again. I think I liked it more when you weren't
Meanwhile at Brown
Summer: Rachel, wait up!
Rachel: hey sum!
Summer: Did you see that hot guy in our biology class?
Rachel: Sum! You're taken!
Summer: I know, I know. But you could date him
Rachel: After Todd, I don't know if I'm ready yet
Summer: Oh come on, I have to do this for my best friend
Rachel: awww. I'm your best friend, how cute
Summer: Well yeah, except for Marissa
Rachel: You talk about her so much. I would love to meet her.
Summer: Yeah, maybe when she's not off on an island in the middle of nowhere
Rachel: Sounds like an adventure. Wish I could do that. Speaking of your boyfriend, where is he?
Summer: Still in Newport. He works at some comic book store
Rachel: Sum, I didn't know you were into nerds
Summer: Well…cute nerds
Rachel: oh, I have to meet him too then
Summer gives her a look
Rachel: I mean just to see if he's good enough for you
Summer: Maybe I could introduce you to Ryan too
Rachel: Ryan? Sum at least let me catch up on the first two people
Summer: Well he's hot and now single
Rachel: What do you mean now single?
Summer: He was dating Marissa
Rachel: mhmm…I have literature now, bye
Summer: I have a free period now, see ya Rach
Summer stand is the corridor
"Things are never going to be the same again," she whispers to herself and then heads off to her dorm room
At the Comic Book Store
Taylor: Hi Seth
Seth: Taylor please go away I was about to call Summer
Taylor: I'll be quiet
Seth: Fine
Seth dials a number and puts the phone up to his ear
Seth: Summer!
Taylor: ooh, let me talk to her!
Taylor grabs the phone out of Seth's hand
Taylor: hey sis!
Summer: um…hi Taylor, I actually wanted to talk to Seth
Taylor: Yeah, I know but I thought about it and decided that your sister would be more important than Seth.
Summer: Yeah, okay, now can you please give the phone to Seth?
Taylor: of course! Bye Summer!
She hands the phone back to Seth
Seth: Sorry about that. I knew I shouldn't have called you while she was here
Summer: It's fine Cohen. I've gotta go, I have class. But I just wanted to tell you that I'm coming back to Newport for thanksgiving. So I'll see you in three days.
Seth: That sounds great! Love you
Summer thinks, then responds
Summer: Love you too
Cohen Kitchen
Ryan: Hey guys
Kirsten: Oh hey Ryan
Sandy: Look kid, I know you've been through a rough time. But this time next year Marissa may be here.
Ryan: Yeah, sure
Kirsten: Don't lose faith
Ryan: I'm tiered
He leaves for the pool house
Kirsten: We've gotta do something Sandy
Sandy: There's nothing we can do but wait
Kirsten: How long are we going to wait Sandy? Until Marissa comes back? Because that may never happen.
She storms off towards their bedroom.
