My Mistake
A/N: I took the time to rewrite this since I feel like I have grown as a writer and would like to project that in most of my stories. The sequel is already up, since I am rewriting the series I will be renaming the second part to this story but it will be on my profile under grim tales so it should be quite easy to find.
Minnie
You know what sucks?
Seeing the man you love and your enemy sleeping together.
Yeah, yeah. You know who I'm talking about, Junior and Mimi. Now you're thinking 'THAT'S YOUR BROTHER!'
One, he is my half brother. Two, in this type or world I wouldn't think incest is a big surprising thing. Three, Flowers in the Attic. You cannot tell me no one wanted Chris and Cathy together and they're full-blooded siblings!
Anyways,
Flash Back
There was a weird noise coming from my brothers room.
I being the curious and love-struck sister I was went to check on him, to make sure he was okay.
I didn't except my heart to become broken when I saw the sight I did.
Junior, ontop of Mimi whose were wrapped around his neck. His were hands holding him up ontop of her. Her legs were wrapped around his waist.
They were both practically naked!
I handled Junior's rejection of me a long time ago but I did not except for him to throw something like this in my face.
Yes, it's his room but him knowing how thin the walls were and that I could hear, that's just heartless!
So I did what any girl would do when she wanted to deny the heart break her lover had caused her-
I ran. I ran and ignored his calls from behide me. For all I knew I was imaging them. I could have been hallucinating.
I wouldn't pass the idea.
"Minnie!" Go away…
"Minnie, please wait!" Shut up!
"MINNIE!" his voice grew further and further away. For that I was grateful.
I didn't want to hear his voice.
I didn't want to be anywhere near him.
I just wanted to get away and I knew exactly how.
End of Flash Back
Junior
Shit shit shit shit!
Okay, I'm an idiot.
It was just, her.
The room felt like it was closing in, my body was hot and honestly I wasn't thinking at all.
I didn't even consider that maybe there was the possibility that Minnie could hear or come into my room.
I'm a pretty fucked up brother aren't I? Well this is a fucked up family.
It sucked, but who can really blame me? What was it that mom would say?
"boys think with their dicks"
Right. And here I thought I would prove her wrong.
I raced to get my clothes back on looking out the door until I saw she was gone.
"Just leave her Junior. She knew very well that there was never a possibility for you two to be together. You two are siblings" Mimi said
"Half-" I tried to correct but the damned vixen just had to cut me off.
"Siblings all the same Junior. She's being a child. Just come back here and let's continued what we were doing before she intruded."
I looked at her in disbelief. Did I really get caught up with such a bitch?
I damaged my relationship with my sister for this?
I shoke my head n pulled my shirt on running out the door.
I would fix this.
"MINNIE!" Why wouldn't she answer me? She caught you about to fuck Mimi, that's why.
"Shut up!" I groaned at my inner demon. Whatever.
"MINNIE!"
"Go away.." I heard a whisper, Minnie!
I tripped over someone, her foot. I groaned sitting up and looked over to her.
She was curled up against the corner of the wall.
My eyes widen "Minnie your….eyes.."
She had both her eyes, Both when I should have the other.
I touched my eye just to make sure it was there and indeed it was.
I looked her up and down she was taller, older. She was filled out more curves in the right places, hair longer.
She wasn't supposed to age! We figured that out when I kept growing but she forever stayed the same!
I examined her more to see that her other eye was red.
This is so confusing.
"Mi….nnie?"
She swiftly got up "Yes?"
"How…you can't grow.."
"A friend.."
"Minnie I don't understand" I said, getting to my feet.
"She's been around. Raven hair. Ruby eyes. You might have noticed if u weren't so controlled to droll over Mimi!" she snapped at me, she's never snapped at me!
Okay well that time where she all 'LOVE ME JUNIOR LOVE ME!' but that was such a long time ago.
"Min-"
"Just go away Junior…" she said, turning away from me. I could not let her go!
"But Minnie!"
She spun around "GO AWAY JUNIOR!"
"IT JUST HAPPENED! IT ISN'T LIKE YOU OWN ME OR ANYTHING! YES I SHOULD HAVE BEEN MORE CAREFUL BUT YOU ALREADY KNOW THAT WE WOULD HAVE NEVER WORKED!"
Her eyes widen, I cursed in my mind.
I was not helping her not hate me!
I had to fix this, I only knew one way to do so.
I kissed her.
I didn't want her sad, I didn't want her to hate me. If I had to pretend to love her for awhile to make her happy, to make her stay, then so be it.
She was my sister and I loved her if that would make her happy so be it.
I thought she was calm till she shoved me away and when I saw shove I mean shove.
accompanied by a slap.
I fell to the ground looking up only to see tears in her eyes.
"Stop playing with my feelings!" she screamed, she was yanking as her hair. She was a damn mess.
"Minnie.."
And with that she ran off I got up to run after her again but I didn't see her…I didn't see my sister..
So I ran all over the place just trying to find her but I saw her no where.
I really lost my sister…
She ran away
To get away..
From me…
I will never forget this….
My….Mistake
A/N: Okay so this is the rewrite! as you can see there are some different things as well as some things that are the same from how it was written previously such as the cover and other things! so I hope you guys enjoyed reading it.