Hey I'm new to fanfiction I've never been on this website but my friends made me join. So plez be nice read n review my story its called 'My Dark Guardian Angle'. This has probably been done a million and one times but the story is about Maximum Ride living with her abusive and careless father Jeb but one day she meets a mysterious boy named Fang. Fang has a big secret read to find out what! Idk I'm new. hopefully you like it.

"MAX! Get your ass down here and make me something to eat!"

"Coming dad." I called back in my sweetest voice. Please spare me.

My name is Maximum Ride Max for short. I live with my 'dad' Jeb in LA. We live in this big house in this rich people neighborhood. Ugh. I love my dad but he doesn't love me or he does but doesn't say or show it. He yells and hits me but still wants me to do shit for him.

"MAX-"

"I'm getting dressed now." I hurried and interrupted his complaining.

Sighing I climbed out of bed and walked over to my closet. I put on red skinny jeans, a white tank, black boots, my fav. Silver belt (that goes over the shirt), and a black mid arm jacket. I kissed the picture of my mom that hung on my mirror and went to the bathroom. After brushing my teeth, fixing my hair and putting on make up to cover up my few scares I slid down the rail and ran to the kitchen. There I saw Jeb and his girlfriend of the week (yes week but more on that later) Sara kissing at the table. Can we say gross!

"Morning dad, Sara." I said walking to the stove, there was food cooking on it. Well what the hell did he call me for then?

"Good morning Max. I'm making breakfast already so you don't have to worry about it." Sara said with a smile. I like Sara she's a hell of a lot better then skank 23 last week.

"Um ok thanks I guess."

"Yes but it's your job not Sara's." Jeb sneered at me. See this is our relationship, beautiful ain't it?

"I'm sorry dad it won't happen again." Yeah right.

"Damn right it won't." and with that he went back to kissing Sara she giggled. UGH I think I had a baby barf!

"oh and I'm going to be home late tonight. I have to go to the library to get a book for school (lie) then I have to work tonight (lie) and then I'm making up a community service I missed (lie I did that last week I get in to trouble a lot but more on that later). Lie it was all lies but as long as he didn't know that I was good.

"Fine, but call me every time you go somewhere new and be home by 11:30." Jeb said In his 'you disobey me I'll kill you voice. But he seemed bored to tell me this probably because I interrupted his makeout session. Whatever

"Ok bye." I grabbed a fiber bar and vitamin water.

I slung my bag over my shoulder, put in my headbuds to listen to my iPod and left. I finished my bar like the second I left now I'm walking to school through the woods in the back of my house. I usaly see a lot of hikers out here because this is like the only forest in LA. It was a nice day and I was in no rush to get to school so I walked slowly. This is the long way to school the fast way is thought the front of my house but I don't like going that way. As I was listening to 'Airplanes' by B.O.B ,Haley Williams, and Eminem a dark figure passed over my head. I looked up to see a… a…well, it looked like a big bird but this bird was less graceful then most birds. Weird. Whatever I was at school now. Late as always but hey that's me. Let the torture begin.

Ok so what do you guys think I really want to know Fang will be in the next chapter. Tell what you think I should add. RnR!