Yah, this is it. This is my first fanfic.
Don't own Gundam 00 in ANY WAY.
Only thing I think I own is this fan fiction.
Mistakes will most likely be present.
I'd like tips for my writing if you don't mind.
Without further ado: Read.
Setsuna sprinted toward the reservoir, slightly skidding on corners but moving fast. He had left for Exia as soon as he got the transmission. In a single bound, he neatly leapt off the edge, assuming a streamlined position and dived in the water. As he swam for his mobile suit, a number of civilians stared in shock at the boy who had just dived in, fully clothed, in winter. When he didn't come back up, a couple of them took their cellphones out and began to call for help, when the Exia burst from the waters in a flash of GN particles and began flying off into the distance, clearly highlighted in the night sky. They stared dumbly as Exia flew out of sight, and then some simply shook their heads and continued whatever they were doing, and others frantically began posting online what had just occurred.
Setsuna was properly yelled at after the mission, and while Feldt and Chris worked on using Veda and covering up the incident online, Allelujah and Lockon both suggested moving Setsuna's mobile suit to a less conspicuous place.
And dry, they added after they caught Setsuna sneezing with a slight sniffle.
First fanfiction. Short, isn't it? Got the idea from the first season. Was going to write "lake," then wrote "reservoir," since it seems a lot more realistic.
R&R please?