Iris: Through These Eyes
A Saiyuki fanfiction by jadesword -- a giftfic
for El Caballo Blanco
Loosely based on the song Iris by the Goo Goo
Dolls
notes:
* * -- emphasis
The road to the West stretches to the horizon, endlessly.
By day it is a silver ribbon that taunts my eye with its
shimmer, and at night it is a dull light-path that
strains my vision.
For once there is some silence to be had in the Jeep,
under the overcast sky that has loomed over us for the
past week. We have been traveling these plains for some
time now, great flat expanses of land stretching out in
all directions. From time to time we pass small copses
of trees to break the monotony, but in this part of the
Journey to the West, we are just going this way because
this way is west, and the exhaustion is starting to
clamp down.
Goku, listless and quiet, cups his chin in one hand and
stares as is his wont, although right now I'm not sure
he's seeing anything. The same look is on Sanzou's face
-- or it would if his eyes were open; he has gone to
sleep again.
And Gojyo...he still seems somewhat conscious, although
the look in his eyes resembles mine and the others' --
completely disinterested in the world around us. His
hair hangs limp and dispirited around his shoulders,
without even enough life to reflect things, weakly or
not. I look at him in the rear-view mirror and watch as
he lights another cigarette -- with some difficulty in
the oppressively humid air -- and puts it to his lips.
I could reach back and put my hand on his shoulder, if
I try -- he slouches forward now, and puts his own chin
in his free hand to almost mirror Goku's pose -- but I
need to keep Jiipu on an even track, going straight
down this west-leading road through nowhere.
I need to keep him at arm's length for his own sake and
mine -- my hands are bloody, they have killed for
passion, and I will not go through it again.
And he has seen what happens when emotions rule and
beget violence, and I will have nothing to do with a
repetition of his experiences.
But I want to touch him somehow, so much.
He sees me looking at him then, and a small smile
takes its time spreading over his mouth. I give him one
of my emptily reassuring smiles -- he is too tired to
know the difference -- and when he looks away, unable to
make an effort, I let my smile become a little real.
Just a little. He cannot know how much that smile, tired
as it is and vacant, means to me.
***
A raindrop strikes the windshield with a loud splat, and
another, and another...and suddenly the storm long
promised by the brooding sky breaks around us with enough
force to shatter our senses. It is all I can do to keep
Jiipu on the road as it suddenly becomes muddy and unfit
for driving on, and it is barely in the nick of time that
Goku's eyes spot the abandoned house, set well back into
its copse of trees.
Dinner is a threadbare affair, and the pouring rain
provides a dreary, pounding background: something canned
from the bag of emergency rations that I keep in the
back of the Jeep, and cold water from the taps -- which
is all that they can produce.
Goku makes faces at the half-stale bread, canned beans
and cold oil-preserved fish, but he wolfs down his
share and asks for more. It's more of a reaction than
Sanzou's, who turns up his nose at the meager
provisions and walks off, locking the door of the
largest bedroom behind him with a loud click.
Gojyo accepts his plate silently and goes to stand near
the window, staring out at the gray without even seeing
the food he's eating.
Dinner has no taste for me either, not only because it's
cold but because this is a night when I, too, am
burdened by the unending rhythm of the water falling
endlessly from the sky. On a night like this, the rain
whispers to me of the crimes I've committed and the tears
I've caused to fall in my wake, in this life that is no
longer human.
In the flashes of lightning I watch Gojyo shovel his food
in, and wince when he is done -- he leaves no crumbs, but
he doesn't ask for more either. It makes me think that he
ate solely for the purpose of keeping his body alive, for
the sake of going on breathing in his own life that is
perceived as taboo by nearly every single human being
we've passed on this long westbound road.
He smells of sweat and salt as he walks past me towards
the kitchen and its door to the backyard, and I breathe
deep of the despair in his shadowed eyes.
***
At midnight I get out of the worn armchair near the
little fire and look around. It is time for my watch, and
with a small grunt Goku lowers himself into the spot that
I have just left. He is asleep within moments, Hakuryuu
draped loosely around his neck for warmth.
They make a tableau together, encouraging in its own
little way -- that those two could sleep through the
night before the end of the world as long as we're all
still together -- and I gaze at them for a moment by the
flickering fire, before noticing that one of us is still
missing.
The door to the kitchen hangs ajar and I go through it,
guided by the tiny pinprick of light that fades in and
out of sight -- Gojyo's cigarette, its tip glowing redly
in the deepening storm night.
With the firelight behind me I can just barely make him
out: he is braced against the kitchen sink, one hand
hovering near a glass, the other holding the cigarette
to his lips.
'What are you doing here?'
There is no anger in his voice, or even annoyance --
just a deep tiredness that makes me frown just thinking
about it, perhaps because I share the same feeling.
I feel my way toward the kitchen table and one of its
chairs before answering him: 'I'm watching out for
anything that could happen. I've just relieved Goku,
and he's sleeping now. Even if we're out here in the
middle of someplace we'll never be familiar with
because we're just passing by, I can't forget that
there are still many out there who are trying to stop
us.'
'Shit, don't even talk about it,' is his reply,
taking another deep drag off his cigarette. 'I don't
even have the strength to fight anyone or anything.'
'You don't have to,' I tell him. 'You don't even have
to notice me here. And at least I can assure you that
I can handle any minor incursions until morning.'
'Why do you keep doing that?' Gojyo asks after a few
minutes of storm-sounds and thunder.
'I'm sorry,' I say, 'doing what?'
'It's not just that you're telling me not to notice
you here -- well shit, obviously you're here because I
*don't* talk to myself! And you do that invisible
thing all the time...when we're in a town and it's time
to sleep, the monkey snores like he's fuckin' sawing
logs and the monk mutters like he's nuts -- but you and
that dragon of yours, it's like the moment you two fall
asleep you two cease to exist...that's frigging
creepy....
'Even in that little house I always had to keep
checking up on you and your injuries -- you were
always too quiet a sleeper except when you were having
nightmares, I tended to think you were dying all the
time just because I couldn't hear you breathe! --
Hakkai, why do you *like* vanishing like that? Spare a
thought for us, will you?'
Lightning flashes overhead and he is lit up -- his red
hair and eyes glow in the storm and the expression on
his face is unreadable to me.
Even then, he takes my breath away...I hear myself gasp
and the sound is clearly audible in the silence after
the thunderclap.
He smiles then, a little crookedly. 'Y'know, Hakkai,'
he begins in a conversational manner, 'there are some
of us here on this earth that wouldn't like it if you
suddenly up and vanished without a trace on us.'
'Of course,' I say quietly. 'The Three Aspects sent me
along on this Journey to the West, and if I leave, I
think they would be most displeased. And, let us not
forget that Goddess of Mercy -- she would probably want
to kill me herself if I did that.'
'They can all go hang,' he mutters fervently. 'And none
of them count, they ain't on this earth. I'm talking
about that idiot monkey because he looks up to you as
family. I'm talking about that corrupt monk because if
you never noticed he talks sense to you, while the rest
of us are fuckin' trash....'
'And then there's you,' I say quietly, interrupting him
as he takes his next breath. 'Who saved my life and
helped me when I was in need. Those things are important
to me -- I think about them when I'm being invisible, as
you call it, Gojyo. In fact that's what helps me remember
that I am *not*.'
'You confuse me, Hakkai, you really do.' Gojyo stubs out
his cigarette and comes around the table, stopping in
the one place with any warmth in the kitchen: in the
doorway to the main room, where the fire in the fireplace
continues to burn.
It places him behind me -- he is directly between the
door and my chair. Now he is the invisible one, and his
next words seem to come out of the storm itself.
***
'You aren't invisible, Hakkai, and you never will be.
You're just kidding yourself if you think we're not
aware of you...how can we not be? You're just standing,
or driving the Jeep, and we know you're there. If we're
fighting those goddamned youkai you just can't be missed
-- heck, those blasts of yours, right?
'When you were getting well and all that I knew you were
at home all the time -- I'd come back and the house'd
still be clean and you'd be sitting quietly in bed,
pretending all the time it hadn't been a bother or a pain
but I always thought about you pulling stitches or
reopening an injury. And sometimes I'd see blood on your
bandages and I could never get mad at you for what you
were doing....
'Gods help me, Hakkai, you can't be invisible to me, not
when I feel so strange when you're around me. You make me
feel like I can do anything, so long as you could see it.
And you make me feel like I couldn't live in a world
without you. You're no woman but I keep thinking about
doing that sort of thing with you, being super nice and
trying to win your heart and all the shit I do to get
another girl...heck, do you know how long I've wanted to
hold you?'
His words fall against my defenses like the storm
outside, and wash them away.
'Maybe I do.' Again I interrupt him, and the lightning
strikes to illuminate the shock in his features.
'Because I've wanted the same, for a very long time.'
I rise to my feet and step toward him, and we stop
together between the table and the door into the main
room of the house.
'You do?'
I nod, once. 'Yes, I do.'
He moves between one lightning strike and another
-- one moment, I can see him standing some three feet
away from me and in the next, his arms are around me
and his forehead is resting on my shoulder.
I bring my own arms up to hold him and breathe deep.
And in the next moment, somehow, we are moving together
-- my feet and his stepping softly on the worn wooden
floor of this empty house, our bodies swaying together
in a silent dance.
The storm fades into silence and the fire darkens into
the dying glow of its embers; still we are there,
standing together, wrapped in each other. I can see him
and he sees me.
Now, in this moment...I think I know who he is completely.
And I know he feels the same about me.
~owari
A Saiyuki fanfiction by jadesword -- a giftfic
for El Caballo Blanco
Loosely based on the song Iris by the Goo Goo
Dolls
notes:
* * -- emphasis
The road to the West stretches to the horizon, endlessly.
By day it is a silver ribbon that taunts my eye with its
shimmer, and at night it is a dull light-path that
strains my vision.
For once there is some silence to be had in the Jeep,
under the overcast sky that has loomed over us for the
past week. We have been traveling these plains for some
time now, great flat expanses of land stretching out in
all directions. From time to time we pass small copses
of trees to break the monotony, but in this part of the
Journey to the West, we are just going this way because
this way is west, and the exhaustion is starting to
clamp down.
Goku, listless and quiet, cups his chin in one hand and
stares as is his wont, although right now I'm not sure
he's seeing anything. The same look is on Sanzou's face
-- or it would if his eyes were open; he has gone to
sleep again.
And Gojyo...he still seems somewhat conscious, although
the look in his eyes resembles mine and the others' --
completely disinterested in the world around us. His
hair hangs limp and dispirited around his shoulders,
without even enough life to reflect things, weakly or
not. I look at him in the rear-view mirror and watch as
he lights another cigarette -- with some difficulty in
the oppressively humid air -- and puts it to his lips.
I could reach back and put my hand on his shoulder, if
I try -- he slouches forward now, and puts his own chin
in his free hand to almost mirror Goku's pose -- but I
need to keep Jiipu on an even track, going straight
down this west-leading road through nowhere.
I need to keep him at arm's length for his own sake and
mine -- my hands are bloody, they have killed for
passion, and I will not go through it again.
And he has seen what happens when emotions rule and
beget violence, and I will have nothing to do with a
repetition of his experiences.
But I want to touch him somehow, so much.
He sees me looking at him then, and a small smile
takes its time spreading over his mouth. I give him one
of my emptily reassuring smiles -- he is too tired to
know the difference -- and when he looks away, unable to
make an effort, I let my smile become a little real.
Just a little. He cannot know how much that smile, tired
as it is and vacant, means to me.
***
A raindrop strikes the windshield with a loud splat, and
another, and another...and suddenly the storm long
promised by the brooding sky breaks around us with enough
force to shatter our senses. It is all I can do to keep
Jiipu on the road as it suddenly becomes muddy and unfit
for driving on, and it is barely in the nick of time that
Goku's eyes spot the abandoned house, set well back into
its copse of trees.
Dinner is a threadbare affair, and the pouring rain
provides a dreary, pounding background: something canned
from the bag of emergency rations that I keep in the
back of the Jeep, and cold water from the taps -- which
is all that they can produce.
Goku makes faces at the half-stale bread, canned beans
and cold oil-preserved fish, but he wolfs down his
share and asks for more. It's more of a reaction than
Sanzou's, who turns up his nose at the meager
provisions and walks off, locking the door of the
largest bedroom behind him with a loud click.
Gojyo accepts his plate silently and goes to stand near
the window, staring out at the gray without even seeing
the food he's eating.
Dinner has no taste for me either, not only because it's
cold but because this is a night when I, too, am
burdened by the unending rhythm of the water falling
endlessly from the sky. On a night like this, the rain
whispers to me of the crimes I've committed and the tears
I've caused to fall in my wake, in this life that is no
longer human.
In the flashes of lightning I watch Gojyo shovel his food
in, and wince when he is done -- he leaves no crumbs, but
he doesn't ask for more either. It makes me think that he
ate solely for the purpose of keeping his body alive, for
the sake of going on breathing in his own life that is
perceived as taboo by nearly every single human being
we've passed on this long westbound road.
He smells of sweat and salt as he walks past me towards
the kitchen and its door to the backyard, and I breathe
deep of the despair in his shadowed eyes.
***
At midnight I get out of the worn armchair near the
little fire and look around. It is time for my watch, and
with a small grunt Goku lowers himself into the spot that
I have just left. He is asleep within moments, Hakuryuu
draped loosely around his neck for warmth.
They make a tableau together, encouraging in its own
little way -- that those two could sleep through the
night before the end of the world as long as we're all
still together -- and I gaze at them for a moment by the
flickering fire, before noticing that one of us is still
missing.
The door to the kitchen hangs ajar and I go through it,
guided by the tiny pinprick of light that fades in and
out of sight -- Gojyo's cigarette, its tip glowing redly
in the deepening storm night.
With the firelight behind me I can just barely make him
out: he is braced against the kitchen sink, one hand
hovering near a glass, the other holding the cigarette
to his lips.
'What are you doing here?'
There is no anger in his voice, or even annoyance --
just a deep tiredness that makes me frown just thinking
about it, perhaps because I share the same feeling.
I feel my way toward the kitchen table and one of its
chairs before answering him: 'I'm watching out for
anything that could happen. I've just relieved Goku,
and he's sleeping now. Even if we're out here in the
middle of someplace we'll never be familiar with
because we're just passing by, I can't forget that
there are still many out there who are trying to stop
us.'
'Shit, don't even talk about it,' is his reply,
taking another deep drag off his cigarette. 'I don't
even have the strength to fight anyone or anything.'
'You don't have to,' I tell him. 'You don't even have
to notice me here. And at least I can assure you that
I can handle any minor incursions until morning.'
'Why do you keep doing that?' Gojyo asks after a few
minutes of storm-sounds and thunder.
'I'm sorry,' I say, 'doing what?'
'It's not just that you're telling me not to notice
you here -- well shit, obviously you're here because I
*don't* talk to myself! And you do that invisible
thing all the time...when we're in a town and it's time
to sleep, the monkey snores like he's fuckin' sawing
logs and the monk mutters like he's nuts -- but you and
that dragon of yours, it's like the moment you two fall
asleep you two cease to exist...that's frigging
creepy....
'Even in that little house I always had to keep
checking up on you and your injuries -- you were
always too quiet a sleeper except when you were having
nightmares, I tended to think you were dying all the
time just because I couldn't hear you breathe! --
Hakkai, why do you *like* vanishing like that? Spare a
thought for us, will you?'
Lightning flashes overhead and he is lit up -- his red
hair and eyes glow in the storm and the expression on
his face is unreadable to me.
Even then, he takes my breath away...I hear myself gasp
and the sound is clearly audible in the silence after
the thunderclap.
He smiles then, a little crookedly. 'Y'know, Hakkai,'
he begins in a conversational manner, 'there are some
of us here on this earth that wouldn't like it if you
suddenly up and vanished without a trace on us.'
'Of course,' I say quietly. 'The Three Aspects sent me
along on this Journey to the West, and if I leave, I
think they would be most displeased. And, let us not
forget that Goddess of Mercy -- she would probably want
to kill me herself if I did that.'
'They can all go hang,' he mutters fervently. 'And none
of them count, they ain't on this earth. I'm talking
about that idiot monkey because he looks up to you as
family. I'm talking about that corrupt monk because if
you never noticed he talks sense to you, while the rest
of us are fuckin' trash....'
'And then there's you,' I say quietly, interrupting him
as he takes his next breath. 'Who saved my life and
helped me when I was in need. Those things are important
to me -- I think about them when I'm being invisible, as
you call it, Gojyo. In fact that's what helps me remember
that I am *not*.'
'You confuse me, Hakkai, you really do.' Gojyo stubs out
his cigarette and comes around the table, stopping in
the one place with any warmth in the kitchen: in the
doorway to the main room, where the fire in the fireplace
continues to burn.
It places him behind me -- he is directly between the
door and my chair. Now he is the invisible one, and his
next words seem to come out of the storm itself.
***
'You aren't invisible, Hakkai, and you never will be.
You're just kidding yourself if you think we're not
aware of you...how can we not be? You're just standing,
or driving the Jeep, and we know you're there. If we're
fighting those goddamned youkai you just can't be missed
-- heck, those blasts of yours, right?
'When you were getting well and all that I knew you were
at home all the time -- I'd come back and the house'd
still be clean and you'd be sitting quietly in bed,
pretending all the time it hadn't been a bother or a pain
but I always thought about you pulling stitches or
reopening an injury. And sometimes I'd see blood on your
bandages and I could never get mad at you for what you
were doing....
'Gods help me, Hakkai, you can't be invisible to me, not
when I feel so strange when you're around me. You make me
feel like I can do anything, so long as you could see it.
And you make me feel like I couldn't live in a world
without you. You're no woman but I keep thinking about
doing that sort of thing with you, being super nice and
trying to win your heart and all the shit I do to get
another girl...heck, do you know how long I've wanted to
hold you?'
His words fall against my defenses like the storm
outside, and wash them away.
'Maybe I do.' Again I interrupt him, and the lightning
strikes to illuminate the shock in his features.
'Because I've wanted the same, for a very long time.'
I rise to my feet and step toward him, and we stop
together between the table and the door into the main
room of the house.
'You do?'
I nod, once. 'Yes, I do.'
He moves between one lightning strike and another
-- one moment, I can see him standing some three feet
away from me and in the next, his arms are around me
and his forehead is resting on my shoulder.
I bring my own arms up to hold him and breathe deep.
And in the next moment, somehow, we are moving together
-- my feet and his stepping softly on the worn wooden
floor of this empty house, our bodies swaying together
in a silent dance.
The storm fades into silence and the fire darkens into
the dying glow of its embers; still we are there,
standing together, wrapped in each other. I can see him
and he sees me.
Now, in this moment...I think I know who he is completely.
And I know he feels the same about me.
~owari
