Okay so, like the Summary said, these are remakes and Post's of episodes. They are all short.I would completely adore reviews. The episode I am redoing or adding to will be in the name of the chapter and probably at the beginning of the story like so:


Post Fault:

"I want a new partner."

Captain Donald Creagen was shocked, to say the least. Had he heard her right?

"What?" He said. His voice came out quiet and small.

"Please don't make me say it again." She replied looking down.

"Why? You and Elliot are great partners. You work so well together. Why would you want to throw away 7 years of that?"

"Are you trying to guilt me into staying?" She said, her voice a little angry now.

"Yeah, next is bribe then scaring." He said only half joking.

"You can't make me change my mind." She said very sternly.

"But why?"

She paused before answering. "I... I just..." She sighed at her inability to come up with an answer.

"I just can't be here with him." She finally spat out.

Creagen sighed and looked down. He knew there was no way to change her mind, so he wasn't going to waste his breath arguing with her.

"Are you sure?" He said after a long pause.

"... Yes."

"Absolutely?"

"Yes."

He shook his head and stood up. He was about a foot away from her. She wouldn't dare to look him in the eyes.

"Does Elliot know?"

She took a long sigh before answering.

"I... I didn't tell him... but... I think he won't be surprised when he comes into work tomorrow and sees my desk empty."

"Why not?"

"It's complicated."

She looked up at Creagen. She could tell that he wasn't satisfied with her answer. And he could tell she wasn't going to give him anymore than that.

"Okay.. I'll arange it."

She sighed a sigh of relief. It killed her to do this, but it would kill her more to continue working with Elliot if the whole time she was there he was wishing she wasn't.

"And just so you know. If you ever change your mind, you're always welcome back."

"Thank you, sir."


Well... How was that? Please review. It would be highly appreciated and reviews give me encouragement to write other things if I know what I write is good. So hit the review button then continue this series of redo's of episodes. Next is Fat.
-Lexiii