first fanfiction ever so it may not be the best but tell me what you think :D
As the night dawned, the beautiful sky turned into a soft crimson, the colors overtook the sky filling in everything that the light touched. Sitting on the rooftop of the safe house, Sly was mesmerized by how beautiful and unreal the scene looked. It just seemed so perfect, that only in a fairytale or dream such beauty could exist. The sun was barely still above the horizon. Its light skewed among the clouds, with some violet, some orange, and some red, all vibrant and alive. You can hear the faint crashes of the waves of the beach nearby. This had to be the most beautiful things he has ever seen… Well second most beautiful because there was something or should I say someone that would always take his breath away. To him, she was true beauty's description, not just physically but her personality, her determination, everything about her he loved. Her name was Carmelita Fox. One of the things that was holding him back from being with her was that they came from to opposite worlds. She was born from a family of law enforcement and he was from a family of thieves. He hasn't seen her for almost a month now and doesn't know if he can wait until the next heist to see her again. He lost his train of thought when heard his friend Bentley roll up next to him.
"What's up buddy?" Bentley said.
"Just enjoying the view." Sly said, never taking his eyes the sunset.
"You're thinking about her, aren't you?" Bentley asked.
Sly chuckled and looked at Bentley and said "You know me all too well."
"Well I don't know what you are doing here waiting, just imagining what could happen if you told her how you feel. Look Sly, I know you have strong feelings for her and you can't just leave her wondering. Life is too short for that. Back when Lefewee kidnapped Penelope I was terrified. I thought I was about to lose someone I loved and never get to know if she loved me back or if we would ever have a future together. You feel empty and nothing can ever fill that emptiness until you get that person back and I got lucky and I did get her back but all of us aren't that lucky. What I am trying to say is you should really considered talking to her on how you feel because you never know when it might be too late. All I want is for my best friend to be happy."
After that, Bentley patted Sly on the back and rolled off back into the safe house.
"Where did that come from?" Sly thought to himself. "I guess that doesn't really matter but what does matter is that he is right…"
And with that, Sly picked up his cane, and he started to sprint, jumping from rooftop to rooftop, only to reach the balcony of Carmelita's apartment.
Hi everyone! :) So what do you think?This is my first time ever writing a story here so i hope it isnt to bad.:) I know kinda short the second chapter is little longer :) If you could please review my story and tell me what i need to work on or what i did good i would appreciate it :D