Hello! This is a fanfic of Twilight, set 200 years after New moon, in Jacob's POV. Eclipse never happened, Edward never returned, tear, and Laurent 'abducted' Bella, the wolves being too late. Bella also never found out that Jacob was a werewolf.
This is my first fanfic, and I can't say enough: PLEASE BE A TOUGH CRITIC! I want to become a better writer, and I need help. So thanks for reading and reviews are welcomed!!
DISCLAIMER: I DID NOT WRITE TWILIGHT OR NEW MOON, THOSE BELONG TO THE AWESOME STEPHENIE MEYER!
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I started seeing red, the same time my nose wrinkled in disgust. It was a long time since I'd come across that scent, but I recognized it instantly.
About a second later, I was in the air, my shape quivering until I was running with 4 legs instead of 2. The scent was so icy and sweet, burning my nose.
I let a loud growl escape me as I darted into the forest towards Forks. Somehow, the scent almost didn't fit with a bloodsucker, but I knew that scent. What else could it be?
I was so lost in thought; I almost trampled the next living being I came across. Sam.
I quickly phased back to human form, and the words came in a blur, "Did you smell-" was all I got out before Sam's perfectly serene voice cut me off.
"I don't know why one of them is here, but let's handle this with common sense. Not rush into anything." He said, and I snorted. Typical Sam attitude. If this was some kind of an attack, how could stand around?
Just then, a breeze blew, and Sam and I both turned our heads to see a painstakingly familiar 'person' flying through the clearing not 10 yards away.
Yes, I realize this chapter was rather short. I have I think 6 chapters written down...ready to be typed and uploaded…but I want to see what people think about the beginning first! So please review!