This is my first story so please review. I will be happy to hear any suggestions that you have for it. I will say right now that these characters have only 1 creator…Stephenie Meyer. I am only using these characters and would never call them my own. This story will include characters from Twilight and will feature mainly from Bella's point of view and how she finally finds her one true match. The characters are human in this story.
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Chapter 1:
BPOV:
I awoke to the sound of Charlie's cruiser rolling along the mess of stones that created our small drive-way.
Since it was a Thursday morning I knew there was no way I was going to get out of bed before my alarm went off, so I closed my eyes once again hoping to find that peaceful black abyss that I so longed for - sleep.
It seemed like only moments later I found myself awaking to the horrid beeping of my stupid alarm clock. Jessica would be waiting for me at the shop so I knew I would have to have a shower and something to eat before I left for work.
The cool breeze flowing through my window was enough f a warning for me that today would be just as cool as yesterday and every other day in Forks, Washington. So I grabbed my coat before closing door behind me and leaving for work.
When I got to Fashion Forever I could see Jessica behind the counter struggling with a customer, so I hurried over to see what all the commotions was about.
"It says 25.00 on the tag sir, I'm sorry but that is the price you must pay for the item," Jessica said firmly and professionally to the tall, muscular looking man standing only inches away from her.
"I see that, I'm not blind. But it was on the rack with the sign clearly marked '10 OFF'," he retaliated, "and I refuse to pay full price for it."
Jessica looked as though she was trying extremely hard to control herself, but I knew it was very difficult for her, so after putting down my coat and purse I said to the man, "I'm sorry but another customer must have put it back on the wrong rack after trying it on. I apologize for the inconvenience and will be happy to sell the item to you with the 10 discount as marked."
The man simply smiled at me and over his shoulder I saw that Jessica was mouthing the words 'Thank-you," to me with an apologetic expression before she turned around and headed back to the counter to process the man's purchases.
The day went by at an extremely slow pace, and though we had only few customers, Jess seemed to be happy with the development over the past few weeks since opening her own clothing store.
As Jess and I were about to close up I heard the all to familiar sound of my best friend's Harley pull up outside the store and the sudden shout of my name.
"Bella!" Jacob yelled as he switched off the engine to his motorcycle.
"Sorry Jess, do you mind closing up? I'm gonna head over to Jake's for a while. I forgot he was picking me up this afternoon."
"It's ok Bella, you can go if you want to. It will be good for me to close up by myself once in a while," she replied with a chuckle as I headed out the door.
I saw Jacob straight away, leaning against the side off my truck with his shiny black Harley sitting just next to him.
"Hey Bells, did you forget I was picking you up from work today?" He said with a huge smirk on his face.
"Yeh, actually I did. But you're here now so let's head off." I said to him as I jumped on the back of his bike.
"Aren't you going to take the truck home before you come down to La Push?" Jacob asked with a confused expression.
"Nah, weren't you just going to drop me back here later on to take it home then?" I questioned as if it were blatantly obvious.
He just laughed as the engine roared to life. I had always loved the sound of Jacob's Harley and was starting to save up for my own bike. I knew Charlie would never allow it, but I had already asked Jake if I could keep it in his garage down at La Push, and we could ride together when I came down.
Jacob was thrilled to hear that I was going to ride with him, and had snatched me up into one of his tight bear hugs after told him that I was nearly halfway with the money, and he was ecstatic to help me hide my new toy - when I got it, that is.
Author's Notes - I wasn't sure if this chapter was long enough so please review and let me know weather or not to continue my story. It is my first and I don't will be happy to hear any constructive criticism so let me know what you think…
I will be happy to continue this story for anyone who wishes to read it. The next chapter will be the introduction of Edward, but he will show little emotion because they don't actually talk.
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