Hey people whaddup! HAHA. Well this is a sort of tester… I don't know if I should carry on, I do have ideas but I need your feedback and support to tell me what you think. So please do enjoy!


Summary: Wes and Soul are the classic example of the typical rich sibling relationship. Except Soul knows how to really destroy Wes. He takes everything he has, and that means his elder brother girlfriends.


Soul was with his friends Black*Star and Kidd, at a new, modern bar with laser lights flashing, loud booming music and tons of girls with tiny little outfits and drunk enough to do anything. He was slowly drinking his Manhattan, surveying the girls, which one would fulfil his needs?

Ass was good but her nose was too witch-like

She obviously has some issues with her face; her makeup is so thick you could cut through it

Cankles (no actual physical difference between the ankle and the calf) and slight bingo wings

Hair so curly and you could literally make it crackle with the amount mouse on it.

His ruby eyes casually looking around, and in the light of the laser beam he saw her. She looked childish with her side pigtails, but he could tell she was the same age as him, but she had the tiniest waist he had ever seen, gorgeous legs that seemed to go on for miles, and the firmest ass he had seen in a long time. No other women's assets could compare to this girl at the bar.

It was like, he was the predator stalking up to the unknown prey, he had that look in his eyes, red, but slightly clouded, he got up from his seat, and walked up to the bar confidentially, and surprised the girl by coming on her left side, leaning on the bar counter.

"Hey, noticed you from over there, (pointed at his seat) you are probably the most interesting girl I've seen. Why not dance with everyone else?" Soul asked smoothly. She turned to face him, she was so freaking adorable. Her smooth skin, her fringe making her look so much younger and innocent, however her eyes were what caught his attention most. They were a fierce, passionate forest green, and were highlighted with light make up that seemed to make them stand out even more.

"I don't dance (laughed Maka) and I'm waiting for someone." Answered Maka. He was obviously good looking and didn't use the usual pick-up lines. She knew it was impossible, but she instantly liked him. Tall, tanned and muscular. But his hair was a shade of white that seemed to resemble fluffy, fresh snow on Christmas, his eyes were a carnal ruby, but now they were bright with interest, but his teeth was the most interesting. They were like shark teeth, but it may look odd on other people, but for some how it seemed to suit him. White hair, red eyes and shark-like teeth. "I'm sorry I didn't catch your name?" screamed Maka at Soul as the music was unbearably loud.

"SOUL" He put out a hand.

"MAKA!" Maka screamed, and shook his hand.

"So, who's the lucky guy you're waiting for?" questioned Soul as he ordered two cosmopolitans at the bartender.

"Erm, I think you may know him, he's pretty famous for music. A famous violin player and his whole family is a whole bunch of musicans. The Eva-"Maka half-answered. Soul's eyes widened as she was about to finish her sentence

. A famous violin player.

A family of musicans

And the family name is "E"

Was his father having an affair, or could it be? It would make the most sense for it to be:

"HEY, MAKA! Glad you could make it; I see you got my text." Wes called out, and put his arm around her waist and kissed her cheek.

"Yo, little bro!" called Wes, with a grin. "I see you met MY girl, Maka Albarn. Isn't she just perfect?" praised Wes, and nuzzling his nose into her cheek, where she gave a cute giggle and squeal. As Wes kissed on her little button nose. Did she just squeal? This girl was getting cuter and cuter. He felt pissed with his brother, as Maka was trying to hold Wes's head still he caught a smirk from Wes directed at him.

This little love-dovey act was really strange from the usual moody, distant, argumentative Wes. He did seem generally happy, his playful advances of the girl seemed genuine. Soul saw this girl as special, there was just something about her, her eyes. Her eyes were fierce and defensive, but in the blink of an eye they turned soft and loving. Soul was getting more and more annoyed, her cute squeals were turning into little moans that were barely distinguishable and sly little giggles as Wes was possessively draped his arms all over Maka. This girl should not be in this situation. Soul knew how Wes worked, being a cunning and sly asshole he was. Soul believed that this girl was special and too innocent to be warped into the poisonous web of Wes Evans.

Wes excused himself for the bathroom, Maka turned around to Soul with a blushing face. Her face was so cute, it was making Soul blush a little.

"So, you're the little annoying brother that Wes talks about." Maka teased lightly "It was lovely to meet you" Maka went in to give him a kiss on the cheek. Soul felt something about this girl. She seemed different. A little awkward, innocent and smart. Not the usual slut, but a rare gem. He couldn't help himself, just her natural nature, and Soul fell. He was the thief now and stole Maka, by taking the forbidden kiss, on her lips.


Ahhh, I feel a little poetic. So, the forbidden kiss is just a normal kiss, but as Maka is with Wes and Maka and Soul kissed on the lips. Please review and tell me what you thought of this, because your reviews really count, because they will help me decide, if I should carry on or not. SO PLEASE REVIEW!

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