A/N issues and corrections
Now the chapters ahead are essentially short sections of the story. I will expand and improve them to an average of one thousand words per chapter if the current idea is liked. Reviews can contain problems you think might arise, grammar issues or a direction for the story to head in as after the first day as a team I struggle with RWBY stories. My writing is slow to be corrected as notebook off iPad doesn't like a lot of words on the same page after all it is a NOTEbook not a document app. A beta would be appreciated if you are offering use my facebook to contact me (Jackal Summers) or my email if you prefer (Jackal ). I can not promise I will respond immediately as I do not check email or facebook constantly to much spam mail and do you know this person for email and facebook respectively.
