Hello everyone it's an idea I've got and I really wanted to right a story so on with it and its my first fanfic so please if you can review with helping comments I will be grateful thanks for reading
Disclaimer :I don't own Naruto or any of the characters all rights reserved for Kishimoto Masashi
Chapter 1
Outside of konoha
It was a sunny and hot day but the trees around konoha gave some protection against the heat. Under the trees a caravan was heading towards konoha.
It was five years after the attack of the nine taled fox and konoha was steel under restoration so the merchants hoped for a good trade, the leader of the caravan was a tall man with brown hair and green eyes, he was looking around amazed by the beauty of the forest,
suddenly he heard a voice :halt!!
Out of the shadows of the trees four people clad in flack vests and hitai - ate appeared.
The one who commanded to halt was a tall man with brown eyes and a blonde hair.
"State your business"! He commanded.
The leader of the caravan answered to the shinobi :merchants, shinobi- san we came to trade with konoha, my name is Takeshi Murakawa and I am the representative on behalf of the caravan.
The shinobi looked unimpressed by the introduction his eyes didn't leave Takeshi for a second,
"your permit please" he said
Takeshi took the papers out and gave them to the shinobi.
The shinobi looked at the papers for a moment then he said :"everything is in order you may proceed, "
then a smile crossed his face and he added "sorry for the inconvenience it's just that konoha needs to appear strong and we still didn't fully recovered from the nine tails attack, so it's just security measure,
by the way it's the October 10 so there is a festival tonight the nine tails festival you might want to check it out,"
then he left hastily.
In the meantime in the caravan, a men with black hair and blue eyes overheard the conversation a smirk spread on his face as he thought "interesting, very interesting"
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Konoha
A boy with blonde hair and blue eyes was running around trying to avoid the shinobi who pursued him after he painted the hokage monument he was running and his laugh was heard across the street,
at the end he ducked under a tree and disappeared from his pursuers.
The name of the boy was Uzumaki Naruto, and contrary to the common believe he wasn't stupid at all, but today was his birthday and he really wanted some attention even if it is negative.
From there he proceeded to the hokages tower where he was greeted by the secretary, he went into the hokages room.
The room was fairly big with a desk in the middle a piano behind the door and a sofa on the other side of the room.
Behind the desk was seated an old man with white beard and working on paperwork,
it was Sarutobi Hiruzen the gid of shinobi, when Naruto entered the old man looked up at him then said with a smile "o hello Naruto happy birthday, let me finish here and then we'll go to ichirakus ramen, ok"?
Narutos face lit up with a grin on his face he said" thank you jiji thank you "
The hokage smiled, finishing up fast the rest of the paperwork he took his hat and together they let the tower
On the way to the ramen stand naruto saw the glares the villagers was shooting at him, his mood dumped a bit he turned to the hokage
" jiji do you now why they hate me? " he asked.
The hokage only looked at him with a sad smile" people always fear what they don't understand "he replied eventually" there is nothing more I can tell you "
Narutos face morphed into a scowl for a moment but after a second it was gone and he smiled brightly.
After that they walked in silence for few minutes, then Naruto said" one day I will be hokage and they will all respect me"
Hiruzen just looked at him with a smile but said nothing
After several more minutes thay went into the ramen stand.
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It was evening and Naruto was on his way to get orphanage, he went into a side alley to make a shortcut, he was tired and he desperately wanted to sleep.
When he came to the middle of the alley he saw a restaurant
several people was drinking there, and some smelled like sake, when naruto past by the trash can he looked around as sometimes people was throwing there blunt kunais and shurikans there. Then heard a voice "hey boy are you hungry?" it came from a person with black hair and blue eyes. He tensed not knowing what he wants with him.
The man came closer "are you hungry boy, come on in" he said
Naruto reluctantly entered after him he wasn't hungry but he never says no to free food
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Several hours earlier
After the caravan entered konoha and each merchant went to his own deals, the man with the blue eyes and black hair left the caravan and went to a nearby hotel he registered and after unpacking his belongings he went to see konoha,
The village was lively and the people where having fun in the festival, he went from place to place looking around at the various stands, then he went to a bar where he tried to learn where he can buy an apartment and place for a store.
After some drinks and talk he sow a young boy who walked around the bar and checked the garbage cans he got up and walked towards him, the boy tensed for a moment, but he came close and asked "hey boy are you hungry come on in" the boy agreed and came after him "waiter please i need a children's plate, or better two" the man said, after several minutes the food was brought "you can eat boy it's alright"
The boy looked at him then started to eat fast . "so tell me boy, what where you looking for? He asked
The boy answered" nothing special just Kunai and other stuff a lot of shinobi throwing them hear when they come into the restaurant "
" I see alright then, eat up I'll pay "he said
After he paid he asked" what's your name boy "
The blond looked at him then said" Naruto, Uzumaki Naruto and i think i need to live jiji will be worried "
The Man smiled" i see alright then "he said no need to make him worry, then he got up and left" see you around then Naruto "he said before leaving.
Then Naruto realized something" hey he didn't told me his name!! "he screamd
End of chapter 1
An: hello and thanks for reading my story it is my first fanfiction ever please review and if you have a suggestion please pm me, i can't really say how the update will work because I am learning but I will try to be at least once a month thanks for reading.
Rayven Pendragon out.