Yeah, i know halloween is over and stuff, but i feel like posting horror anyway :P

Okay everyone! I have been in the Naruto section for too long now, so I decided to switch and write about other things that aren't Naruto related ^^ yay for branching out! Also, I write a lot of humor and romance stories as well (i love romantic comedies :)) so I am trying to write about something else- HORROR! yay!
Before I start the story, the original idea was from Kaiimi. HER STORIES ARE AWESOME GO READ THEM :D
But I found Teketeke so awesome that I wanted to try it myself and I thought "You know, I wonder what it would be like if it was in Brawl?" So thus, came this story (thank you for ketting me use the plot Kaiimi!)

But even though I have the same plot, I will NOT recopy the story, and different characters will survive. So yeah, it's my own version of it. Just wanted to clarify.

Okay, now to stop with my ranting, i shall start the story :D

Disclaimer: I do not own brawl or it's characters. But I do own my OC's The Boss and Hunter :D


It was a quiet night in the Super Smash Bros Mansion. All was quiet, except in a certain boy's room.
"Yeah, take that Toonie!" Ness cheered as he took down the young green boy in yet, another round of Melee.

"Aw man..." He grumbled. A laugh was heard from his other side.

"Don't sweat it Toon Link. It's only a game. I'm sure in a couple of years you'll be able to beat Ness!" Said Hunter, a new brawler that had recently joined. He brushed his long blonde bangs out of his face, and eyed the glaring Toon Link.

"Haha very funny." Toon Link said.

"Yeah, it was pretty funny, wasn't it?" Hunter said. A small giggle from Lucas was heard.
"I don't think anyone could beat Ness anyway. He is pretty good at this game." The timid boy said. Ness grinned at his best friend.

"And who knows better then you, huh?" Ness said. Popo, who was also playing in the battle royal, laughed at Ness's words.

"Ah good stuff guys..." He said.


About an hour later, the boys got sick of playing (mostly because they keep getting their butts kicked.)

"Well, I guess this is good night then. You know how the Boss gets when we get to bed late." Ness muttered, turning the game system off.

"Hey, when Master hand is the one in charge, then why do we have to call out manager Boss?" Popo asked. Hunter shrugged.

"My dad's just weird that way. Hey, but before we all go, can I tell you guys this urban legend I heard about?" he said, full of enthusiasm. The other boys looked at each other.

"Sure, go ahead." Ness said, sitting back down. Hunter grinned.
"Okay, I hope you guys don't mind something scary..." He said in a creepy tone of voice. Toon Link groaned.

"Is this that dumb Japanese story you found on the internet this morning?" Hunter nodded.

"Yeah it is, and it's not dumb! It's kinda cool actually!"
"Just tell us the story already!" Popo snapped. Lucas nodded shyly. He hated scary stories.
"Okay then. This is the story of Teketeke..." Hunter said in a creepy tone of voice.

"Teketeke? That doesn't sound very scary..." Popo muttered.

"Sh! Go ahead Hunter." Ness said, with a glare at loud-mouthed Popo.
"Okay then... Anyway, one night, about six years ago, there was a girl walking home late at night. She was about...14 I think? Well anyways, as she going onto the bridge near the edge of the city, the one above the railroad leaving this place, when some guy who was supposedly psycho ran up to the girl and threw her off the bridge. As she was falling, the train zoomed by and sliced her body in half!" He said.

"Oh my God! That's gross!" Ness exclaimed.

"Wait, why did he kill her for no reason?" Popo asked.

"Because according to what a lot of people say, the guy that killed her lived in the woods and it's rumored that he practices witch craft and other demonic stuff. Ever since then the girl's spirit has been angry and chaotic and she takes her revenge upon anyone who's walking out super late at night, about this time. She carries a scythe and out of pure rage, she slices the person in half, mimicking her own disfigurement." Lucas let out a squeak, but covered his mouth up. Toon Link rolled his eyes again. Ness and Popo stared at Hunter.

"So wait... This actually... Happened?" Ness asked. Hunter nodded.

"Yeah, you can look it up online if you want."

"Oh, and here's the funny part: NOBODY has gotten their body sliced in half around here except for that girl. To be honest, I don't even know how people came up with these stupid legends when there has never been any news reports about people getting killed by getting their bodies chopped in half." Toon Link pointed out, skeptical of the whole story. Hunter shook his head.
"Not exactly. Remember a few weeks ago, when that little girl went missing?"
"Yeah. Why?"
"Well, just last week, they found her body in a abandoned barn, sliced in two!" Hunter said, his voice suspenseful. Ness's eyes widened.

"Oh my God, I remember hearing about that!"
"Hm, guess I missed the news report then..." Toon Link muttered. Lucas shivered.
"W-wait, why was she called Teketeke anyway?" He asked. Hunter looked over at him.

"Oh right. Well, when she moves around, she only has her upper body and she has to use her elbows or claw-like hands to move. Weird thing is though, she is, like, insanely fast. That's why when she's coming, run like hell, or you'll end up like her other victims. The reason she's called Teketeke is because when she moves she makes a 'Tek...Tek..' sound." He answered.

"Wait- like is she 'Sonic' fast, or just fast?" Ness asked.

"You know what, I don't know. I'd say about even I guess."

"Well gosh, that's the creepiest story I've heard ever." Popo said. Lucas looked at Hunter.

"The story isn't real, right?" Hunter laughed.
"Of course not! I mean, it could be, but I don't believe in it. It's just something to keep you all awake at night!" He said, "Well, I got to get to bed. Night guys! And remember not to go outside!" Hunter laughed as he walked out of the room. Popo and Toon Link walked out as well. Ness turned to Lucas, who was shivering.
"hey, come on Lucas. It isn't real. You don't have to be scared." Lucas looked at his friend.

"I'm not scared. Who s-said I was?" He said, trying to be brave. He knew the story wasn't real, but he had a strange feeling about it, no doubt.


"God dammit, I can't believe that bitch tricked me again!" Captain Falcon growled under his breath as he walked back to the mansion in the night. Again, like she had done weeks before, Samus had told Captain Falcon that she would go on a date with him. He waited for her since 9:00 at the meeting place she told him to go to. Now it was midnight, and she was a no show.

"Damn I can't believe I waited that whole time... I should have known this would have happened again..." he continued to say to himself.

Suddenly Captain Falcon stopped in his tracks. He looked around, thinking he had heard something. Nobody was there.
"Huh. Maybe it was just the wind..."he said to himself and kept walking.
Tek... Tek... tek... he jumped around again.

"Hello?" He called, then shook his head, "Damn, this is why I hate walking out so late. You always get the feeling someone is watching you..."

Tek... Tek... Tek... Tek...

"Who's there!" he called out. Nothing.
"I swear to God I will start Falcon-Kicking some asses if this is a joke!" he said as he continued on.

tek tek tek tek

"Oh screw this!" He shouted as he broke out into a run.

Tek tek tek tek tek tek tek tek tek tek

"LEAVE ME ALONE!" He shouted, still hearing the disturbing noise.

With the noise getting louder, Captain Falcon turned around to see who was fallowing him.

"HOLY HELL!" He screamed.

SLICE!


And that concludes the fist chapter :D Again, the plot came from Kaiimi (thanks again!)

And yes all the other character from brawl (not melee) will be in this.

So anyway, please review and tell me who you want to live (you're votes will raise the characters chances ;D) or you can vote on my poll!

SO PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK :)