Hey guys,
Ok so this is my first fanfic, and I'm not saying this to be "excused from grammar mistakes" because it doesn't matter if you have written 12 stories or just one.... grammar is something EVERYONE knows! The story should be proof read ahead of time anyway, by either the author and/or the beta.
So this story actually developed from a really weird dream I had a while ago, and ever since I haven't been able to get the story out of my head. I finally found the courage to post it. I have the story roughly outlined almost to the end I just need to perfect it and type it up.
One thing I have to clear up: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANYTHING BY STEPHENIE MEYER. It would be really annoying if I had to type that EVERY chapter, and I might occasionally make up a fun disclaimer, but other than that this is the last disclaimer. You and I both know I don't own Twilight or else it wouldn't be called FANfiction.... get it? ;)
Onto the story!
*****Notice I did change the story around a little, she is now living with Charlie instead of an uncle. ALSO Phil and Renee are the parent/stepparent she left, not BOTH of her biological parents.
The vivid pictures of my past life swam behind my head. I wanted to scream at them, demand that they tell me why they wouldn't leave me alone. I wanted to cling to my mother and cry my heart out and tell her how much I loved her. I wanted to go home and complain about chores, I wanted to be with them again.
"I'm sorry Ms. Swan, I'm sorry. There isn't any treatment. For now all we can do is hope they wake up." A tall man in a lab coat sadly reported.
All of the faces and phrases flowed repeatedly, and regularly in my dreams every night, only leaving me in peace when I woke up in a cold sweat at 2am.
"Mary you know your family loved you very much." The old, tired, and distressed face of my grandmother whispered to me.
"We're sorry Mary, but we just can't take you, our house was destroyed too and we're moving to Atlanta with Jenny, Joe is coming as well, and Mary Katherine is still at school in Ohio." Aunt Vicky said. Her face a common appearance, and the sting of rejection still hurt.
"Marybella, Marybella?" my stepdad said in a singsong voice while trying to get me out of bed so we could make pancakes and surprise mom. "NO!" I wanted to scream, "don't leave! Please don't leave me."
"Mary, Mary!!" My friend George shook me awake. Those images never fail to haunt me. "We're here." He said. "Welcome to Knox, Minnesota."
"Thanks George" I replied.
George was the kind man that had the privilege of sitting next to me on American Airlines. Now we had arrived at my personal hell, a stupid little town called Knox. This is where I was destined to spend the rest of my days, or at least until my mom and stepdad came to get me, which according to the doctor was going to be a while.
Yeah I know it was really short, but I had to stop somewhere and the next chapter will be a lot longer!
Now I'm not one of those people who holds chapters hostage until you review but I do need feedback!
I mean come on I at least need to know someone is reading it and is interested in what will happen.... so I do need AT LEAST 1 review just this once so I know someone's reading it, because I don't want to waste my time perfecting and typing something no one is going to read!
*****Notice I did change the story around a little, she is now living with Charlie instead of an uncle. ALSO Phil and Renee are the parent/stepparent she left, not BOTH of her biological parents.
ok until next time!!! -Marybella :)
