Just the Beginning

by Zana Charleson

Just the beginning of stories to see what works or not. I have a habit of not finishing stories (that are not on Fan Fiction) I want to know what the community thinks is the best way to do a story. :D More info inside.

1. Introduction

Here's the deal, I have a really bad habit of beginning stories and never finishing them. This is to post the fragment document and see if I should continue, these are all Detective Conan beginnings.

Here's what I'm doing:

I'll post a fragment; usually it's about 5 or 6 paragraphs.

If I should continue or not, comment on the piece, if it makes no sense, comment on that, if you think it's a stupid idea, comment on that. I would love some input from the people who actually read these stories.

This is not a review trap or whatever, I reply to all comments (as long as your signed in and not a guest account- because then I can't reply.) and see what I can do as an improving author.

I would appreciate more than 'good.' or 'bad.'. Elaborate a little like 'It was good because I haven't seen this plotline before.' or 'bad because this plotline is over used and obnoxious.' Be blunt. Just don't be mindless. Okay… go! :D