Wow...I went through this and noticed alot, I mean alot of big errors xD So enjoy (this is a Narakuxrin) :3
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"There, last one." Kohaku said to himself after picking the foul smelling herb from its earthly home. His eyes travled to the sky and sighed in relife.'Not a cloud in sight, just the wide and free skys' He swung his scabbered onto his shoulder and trudged back to the castle. Kohaku walked through the woods when a snap of the sticks under weight caught his attention."whos there"He paused a moment before speaking louder" Naraku?" The though of him made kohaku grow wild in a silent anger.
"N-no," The voice studdered back, its cool feminime voice wrapped around him."I-i..." A young woman slipped out of the woods and landed into his arms, She moaned, blood poured from her mouth and stomach."So-so sorry, Kohaku." She wispered, Her familliar looking eyes were staring into the empty abyss of his hardened eyes.
This girl knows my name. "How do you know me?" He questioned, but he got no answer as she grimaced in pain, so,instead, he swept her up and carried her towards the castle, Naraku's castle. For a few minutes no one spoke, but finally she spoke, answering the question he had once dreaded and longed to hear. "I-I knew your sister." Kohaku couldent belive his ears, His sister, still alive? His heart pounded in excitement.
"W-where is she, And how the Hell do you know her!" He was being a little to forcefull, but really he diddnt care at that point of time."Tell me, please!"
Bangs covered her eyes as she spoke in soft wispers."We were attacked, and some man took her and kagome-chan ." Tears poured from her brown eyes, and kohaku brushed them away. Her skin looked so pale. He placed her down under a shady oak and gave her some water.He wanted to scream'what the hell did they do to my sister, and where the hell is she? Oh, whatever bastard hurts his sister will pay a thousand fold or more!' He kept it in though, afraid it would only hurt her more.
He placed down, next to an old gnarled tree, and whiped a few more tears from her pale cheeks. He then took off his sack and pulled out a stomach full of water
She struggled to get up, but kohaku pushed her down."Shh" Kohaku pulled her close,"You shouldnt move, your to weak, we shouldve stopped sooner."After she pulled away, Kohaku handed her the stomach and she snatched it with whatever strength she had. He gazed at her a moment, liking how her long lashes graced her porcielen cheeks. Her lips were full and somewhat inviting, and her doe brown eyes seemed to hold alot of warmth, and hidden pride and strength and her legs were long and gracefull. She was strong, even though at first glance she diddnt look it and Her hands seemed calloused from as though she weild a mighty sword at one time.
She drank her fill, then gasped." I may be weak now..." Pain shot through her body, and she struggled with the last part."But Ill show you who is stronger." She said clenching her blood stained teeth.
He grabbed her hand and rubbed it affectionatly, noting that it was calloused."I like your spirit."He gave her a bright smile. Dreading the next question, he asked," Do you want me to check your wounds?" He was afraid she would think of him as a perve, and he would get some kind of slap.
He took off his sack and started to rummage through it before she even answered."N...no, dont worry about it." He glanced up and Her weak smile told him other wise."Just hold still."
He carfully removed her kimono, but being carefull not to expose her parts she probably didnt want him to see. He gasped."W-what is it?" She questioned weakly. Her curves of her body was beautiful beyond compare. He ran a hand down her side, but the sudden squirm of her body reminded him what he SHOULD be doing."What are you doing?" She sounded a bit angry.
"I'm sorry, maam, your wound just looks so...terible." He lied, her wound was small, and by the looks of it, barely missed the vitale organs. He took out a cloth and sheeps stomach, pored the stored water onto the cloth, and gently applied to her thick cut. Not once did she utter out a yelp in pain, he amired that, for usually most women would cower and wimper even before the slightest touch.
"Your brave" He said quietly.
Her tone softened."Thanks" He wrapped her in what bandages that he still had, then replaced the silken kimono that she wore.
"That should hold you for a while." He got a simple but beautiful smile in response. His gaze lingered on those moist ,pink, carved lips. He wondered what they tasted like. Cherries perhapes.
"Do you have any food? Im starved!"Her simple smile had spread to a devilish one, but quickly turned to a frown. He shook his head from the intimant thoughts.
"No, sorry Ma'am, all of its back at the castle." He helped her up, and green eyes met violet. The wind picked up, whipping the hair from her face. He wanyed to touch the slender curve of her body, to kiss the sweet side of her chin that seemed to stick proudly in the air, to hold her in his arms as she cried his-
"Well, what are we waiting for, I want some lunch." She gave him a wink. And again he had to break from those unsacred thoughts. He moaned from the mention from lunch.
'Lunch, oh crap, Naraku's waiting there for me' "Why dont we find somewhere else to eat"
Her expression changed dramatically."I thought you said there was some food at your place, were you lying?" She then playfully smilled. The sky seemed to change with her mood, because it was no longer a saphirre blue, but a sea grey. The light rumble and flashes warned them of the comming threat. The wind wispered through the pines, causing an erie sound.
He frowned sadly."I guess we are going to my place after all." He sighed and picked up his scabbered and the herbs he had been collecting. "Lets hurry before we get soaked."
He hoisted her bridal style."Hold on. Im going to start running." She wrapped her long slender arms around him, and he started a light jog. His pace then quickened when soft rain drops splashed onto his clothing.
Her presence was lost as his legs pumped harder, but again was made known when she nuzzled into his chest. He pushed harder after that, almost like he had the will to carry on, no matter how sore his legs were getting.
The familliar leaf covered stone pathway was leading them straight to the shrowded castle. He gripped tighter, and prayed that no slip of the foot would come. Thunderous bangs of warnings from the heavens ecoed across the bleak sky. Wind rushed around them, scattering the dead leavs into their paths.
He felt something warm touch his skin lightly, then spread over his stomach. He realised then it must have been her cut reopening. 'Just a bit more!' The entrense to the barrier was aproaching, and he sighed a small relief. He took out a blue cloth from his bag after he had slowed down, and pressed it gently to the barier. It opened up, letting him in, then slammed shut after they had past the purple wall. The rain was blocked out, and for once he was actually glad that Naraku killed all the vegetation in his area from the lack of water.
The girl wrapped her arms even more around kohaku even if he had slowed down to a moderate pace. The reason was she enjoyed the tight mucles and abs that flexed on her. It gave her a cool sence of feeling, and relaxed her to the point of drowzyness. It was then when she felt them go taunt did she look around at her suroundings. Dry. That was a good word for it. Dead trees laid everywhere, all the grass was brown and seemed to reach out for her, for a bit of water. But the most hideous thing she encountered was a man in white, his face covered in some sort of gorilla mask. Ice replaced her blood in a secound, and her hair on the back of her head seem to rise.
"Naraku." Said Kohaku plainly. His eyes flashed from fear to a deep anger that was unreadable.
"Kohaku, who is this wench you have in your arms?" He looked at the girl in hatred. He gritted his teeth. The girl Flopped from kohakus arms, and stood between the both men.(a/n: I desided to give her a last name.)
"You should know my name, my name is Rin, Rin Htsokayo." Her mouth was carved into a frown."Leave Kohaku alone or you'll pay!" She had come inches from Naraku, bravely glaring at him, though only hell knows why. Kohaku meanwhile was stunned. Rin! Rin, It was rin. He felt a tremor of happiness fill him from his toes to his crinkly nose.(a/n:3 sorry just had 2 do that. xD)
Naraku exploded then, not knowing why this girl made him so angry."Young fool, dont you have any idea whom I am? I am Naraku! The will be greatest(a/n xD I almost put Yaoi, Im just so damn Tired) Youkai!"
She huffed then" Your no Youkai, your just a plain hanyou with some useless crappy jewl shards." Oh that hurt, badly. 'That little wench, she'll pay!'
Narakus hand met her cheek, his long sharp claws slicing the delecate skin. She fell helplessly to the ground.Kohaku ran to her and caught her into his arms. "Naraku,please, this girl is badly injured, just let her stay the night, and heal." His eyes seemed to beg greatly.
His hatred filled eyes met kohakus soft and pleading ones. He grumbled and pondered for a secound."Fine, but keep that putrid wench away from me." He swiftly turned around before vanishing into black and purple smoke.
Kohaku sighed in huge relief. He then lifted the unconsious body and headed towards the wooded double doors that lead into the dank castle. His rin, his friend from long ago whom he had once found anoying. He smiled widely, he couldent wait to share stories of the past with her.
Yawns Yay, Im finnally done with this chapter!! Please comment, I will love you 4evah!! I was leaning to a kohakuxrin, but a narakuxrin sounds more fun. Let love bloom tonight to all of you, and my list of reviews. xD