A Pikachu's Life!
This is my first Fan Fiction so don't expect it to be all that. This is uncharted territory for me so I welcome all criticism. DISCLAIMER: I don't own Pokémon. I just own my characters.
Marial the Pikachu woke up next to her mother, a Raichu named Jessica. She went in their "den" and brought out some berries for breakfast. Jessica came out and told her "Today is it, today you go out into the world." This had been her greeting for the last week and today Marial agreed. Though she was stubborn and tried to delay it she had to admit she couldn't be anymore prepared. She was finally ready after weeks of training and months of learning she was able to take care of most of the Pokemon in the forest and knew how to make a comfortable home. So after breakfast she packed some berries, kissed her mother goodbye, and went out in search of a hollow oak tree.
Nearby was a starting Trainer. Her name was Trinity and she was from Cerulean City. She had preparing for this day for months and was just coming from Pallet to pick her Pokemon. She had choosen Squirtle because she prefered Water types and most likely always will. She knew that all her Squirtle knew was Tackle and Leer but she was determined to train it to learn more. They were sighing because Trinity wanted to learn Pokémon and Squirtle thought it would never happen. They had tryed to argue but Trinity couldn't understand Squirtle. Trinity said "That's why I need to learn Pokémon so I can understand you and all my future Pokémon!" She was stubborn as a ox. Suddenly they noticed a rustleing in the bushes and a Caterpie came out. Trinity told Squirtle "Here's our first chance to train!" Squirtle nodded and jumped in front of the Caterpie. "Squirtle, Tackle attack now!" Squirtle used Tackle and the Caterpie used Tackle back. "Alright! Finish it with another Tackle!" Trinity called. This finished the Caterpie and it fainted. "Pokeball go!" Trinity exclaimed as she threw a Pokeball. The Pokeball shook three times then stopped. Trinity had caught a Caterpie! "We did it buddy!" She exclaimed picking up the Pokeball and put it on her belt. "We better get this little guy to a Pokémon Center!" She added. So she and Squirtle ran off.
After a little bit of searching through the evergreen forest Marial had found a hollow willow and this was good enough for her. So she went in and made it more at home. She then explored and came across Trinity, her Squirtle, and the Caterpie. She watched this battle and knew that, with training, this Trainer and her Squirtle could become formidable foes. She decided that they could help her train to avoid getting caught, so she went home to pack. She then began to follow them, training along the way. Over time she would be able to deal with all of the Pokemon in the forest except for the ones released by their previous trainers. Those were strong...
Here is the new and improved Chapter 1! I hope you like it, I did my best to lengthen it but I still don't want to go out too much. Also shoutout to Gigatron4624 and TheLoadingScreen for good advice and constructive critism. I hope you two like the changes. Also from now on I'll put what the Pokemon are saying into parentheses.