So this is a poem that my best friend wrote, and he asked me to post it up, so please read and review.
I Am Who I Am
I once heard a story straight from the heart
About a guy and how his world began to fall apart
It all started when he met the girl that made his life complete
Just thinking of her made his heart skip a beat
There were no imperfections as either one could see
As the weeks passed they fell more in love and were less aware
Of how often life turns out to be unfair
Until one day he finally gave in
he realized there was no way she could win
he said I'm sorry but i have to let you go
As he reached for her hand she pulled away whispering no
When she turned around a tear slid down her cheek
He just stood there speechless, forgetting how to speak
The next few days were the hardest at home
he truly felt he was all alone
His mom pushed in his face how she had won
His dad said "i knew she was just another one"
He really wished his sister was there
And his brother just tried to stay away
At school it was like his friends weren't even there
None of them seemed to really care
His life had no more color, just black and white
Even getting out of bed turned into a fight
Despite their tries things just weren't like before
Then he decided "i don't wanna try anymore"
At that she tried to cut him out
But the more she ignored him the more his feelings began to shout
When he saw her that day she could no longer just walk by
And before she knew it her mouth opened up and out came "hi"
He looked up and said "so now we're talking?"
She just smiled and join his walking
Everyday they talked a little more
And everyday she began to like him a little less then before
As the months passed by she became more and more aware
About how its ok life's unfair
Because eventually everything becomes your past
But your memories will always last
And with that i hope you see
Not all love is meant to be
But hold on and don't give in
Stand tall, hold up your chin
And believe me when i say
The right one will come one day
she'll open your eyes to things you couldn't ever see
I know this because..this is a story all about me...
So keep in mind that my best friend is a guy, and please review and let him and me know what you think, because I think the poem is actually pretty good.