So, This is my first attempt at a CM fanfic so criticism/complements are welcome ;)
I do not own criminal minds or any of its characters...but it's something i'm working on...
It was a typical day. This was a quiet neighbourhood where people could leave their doors open and everyone got along. It was warmer than usual and the Taylors had set up a pool in their back garden for everyone to enjoy. But as usual on a day like this some people always see an opportunity. "I'll be back in a minute mom I'm going to get something" this was his opportunity.
Lauren went back in to her empty house to get her sun cream. But she was too late. The house wasn't empty. He was waiting for her. He had obviously planned this. Watched her for weeks without her knowing and now he was just waiting behind the door until she walked past to get what she needed. He had his weapon of choice in his hand. A steel pipe.
He hit her round the head as soon as she came into focus and she fell instantly. He dragged her round the back of the house where his partner was waiting with the van.
They left no trace except a small pool of blood.
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