This is my full summary: This story is a sequel to The Subspace Emissary. This takes place 1 year after that. After the smashers defeated Tabuu, they all went their own way. Some smashers stayed with each other, but some others went away alone. Now The Subspace Emissary is back with a new leader. Who is it, you ask? You'll see. No it's not Mewtwo. It's an OC. It's still close to Mewtwo. I don't own Super Smash Bros. Brawl and everything that comes in it. I only own the idea for this fic and the new leader of subspace.
Please enjoy and review! Then I'll review your story too. For the rules and more explanation of this, look at chapter 16.
This chapter is re-rewritten! XD
As you can see, I edited this, with the names of the characters in bold.
Enjoy!
We see a place somewhere in Subspace.
We find 2 persons there. The first one is shrouded in the darkness, so we can't see who it is.
"Is everything ready for our attack?" asked the person from the shadows.
The other person looks like the Ancient Minister, but this one has blue robes.
Ancient Commander
"Yes, my lord." answered the Ancient Commander.
"Good, we'll take revenge for your brother leaving us. You can do with him what you want, bring the others to me. The one I want the most is the Pokémon: Lucario, so you'll pay if you don't bring him. I have to take revenge on him for something personal. Now leave and destroy the smash world! And take the ship with you!" ordered the lord.
"Yes, my lord." responded The Ancient Commander leaving.
The scene changes to a stadium.
This stadium is the same stadium Mario and Kirby fought in the first Subspace Emissary. Only now it's on the ground and not in the air.
The screen zooms out and we see this is showed on the news. There's a lot of black around what we first saw and on the black stands: Smash News.
In front of the viewing of the stadium a news reporter came.
"This here is The Stadium." explained the news reporter, "It's the same stadium where Mario and Kirby fought a year ago. It was the finals of the Brawl Tournament. Mario had won like much people wanted, but then the stadium was attacked. Mario, Kirby and a lot of others saved us from that threat. Now we're having another Brawl tournament, because it was popular. This time it's not in the air. I don't know why, maybe it's to have a change. This is the first round and we have the famous Mario again to start against his own brother Luigi. This is going to be a big match. Let's have a look."
The screen zoomed in again and the crowd was going wild.
"Welcome ladies and gentlemen!" said an announcer we don't see, "I'll explain the rules for the ones who don't know them. Each week are 2 smashers fighting here. They're from the same games. Today is the group: Mushroom Kingdom. It's a fight of Mario VS Luigi. They can use the items that appear on the stage to beat their opponent. They can also use their hands or weapons from their own. It's a one stock match. Let the fight begin!"
We see the crowd cheering, but right next to the stadium, we see 2 special "people" who were there to watch the match.
The first one is Mario's girlfriend. She's also the famous princess of Mushroom Kingdom. She only wears pink.
Princess Peach
The second one is Mario's biggest enemy. He's here, because he wants to attack the winner when he is tired and kidnap both of them together with Peach... He always kidnaps Peach. He's also the koopa king.
Bowser
The 2 fighters from the Mushroom Kingdom ran on the stage.
The first one is a plumber wearing red overalls. He has a big mustache, but no beard. He's the mascot of Nintendo. He has a red hat with a 'M' on it.
Mario
The second one is Mario's longer, but younger brother. He wears the same things, only green and the hat has a 'L'. He's always out of the spotlight, but can be a true hero. He hunted ghosts to save Mario one time.
Luigi
The 2 brothers wanted to begin their match, but when they ran to each other to deal the first hit, they were interrupted by the sky. You'll think: how can they be interrupted by the sky?! Well it was because everybody looked at the sky. It was red.
"How" said Mario.
"Is" added Luigi.
"This" added Bowser.
"Possible?!" finished Peach.
"Is the subspace back? I thought they were gone!" said Mario surprised.
"Me too" said Peach floating on the stage while Bowser just jumped.
"We have to beat them no matter what!" explained Mario acting as the leader, "That means we have to work together as a team to beat them!"
"Normally, I wouldn't work together with you guys, but this is an exception." told Bowser.
An airship flew over the stadium and landed there. It was the Great Fox (Fox and Falco's ship).
"Oh no!" shouted Luigi looking at it, "It's the Great Fox! That probably means Fox and Falco probably are in danger!"
"I think you're right." responded Peach worried.
The door went open, there came a lot of primids out of it together with a subspace bomb carried by 2 R.O.B's.
"Oh no! The bomb can't be stopped like we know from before, we have to get out of here and fast!" shouted Mario.
The R.O.B's activated the bomb while our heroes were running away, but the primids blocked the way to the exit.
"Get away!" shouted Bowser destroying a few primids with a Bowserbomb.
"There are too much!" screamed Peach using Toad to protect her against 8 Fire Primids running to her, "We have to get through them and fast!"
"I agree." said Luigi doing a Green Missile blasting one Sword Primid into a whole group.
Suddenly there came a black arrow, it got Bowser and turned him into a trophy.
"Bowser!" called Mario, "Who did this?".
They looked behind them and saw The Ancient Commander, it was trained to work with the machine that was used before by Wario, Ganondorf and Bowser to turn characters in trophy's.
"It's one of those things!" shouted Luigi scared.
"How do you know what it is?" asked Peach surprised.
"King Dedede explained it to me. He trained with those machines too, before he turned against subspace." explained Luigi.
"Let's dodge them and get out of here!" said Peach floating above the primids and then landing at the exit, but she had to run outside, because all the primids where following her.
"Peach, wait for us!" called Mario.
He and Luigi ran after Peach and the primids. Luigi looked behind and saw the R.O.B. going back in the Great Fox together with the trophy of Bowser as it went flying. When Mario and Luigi were outside, Peach and the primids were fighting each other.
"We'll help!" shouted Mario.
With that they begun to fight too. After a long fight they won.
Let's get away, because it's going to explode very soon, probably!" said Mario.
"Good idea." responded Luigi.
They began to run very hard away from the stadium. Suddenly they heard it exploding, they looked behind them to see they were already far enough.
"I wonder if the Great Fox escaped in time." muttered Peach.
"Well, I think it did." said Mario looking above where the Great Fox was flying away.
"Let's search for help from the other smashers to stop the subspace again!" said Peach slamming her right hand on her left.
"Ok, let's-a-go!" shouted Mario.
With that our 3 heroes left, to search for the other smashers.
Meanwhile in subspace...
The lord was watching in a globe and it showed Mario, Luigi and Peach.
"Hmph, those 3 escaped, but it's not bad, I already have one of the 35. I'll catch those 3 later." he thought.
The Ancient Commander came to his leader: "Master, where is our next destination?"
"The jungle, leave right now!" shouted the lord.
"Yes, my lord." answered The Ancient Commander.
"Now are the next 2 smashers." thought the lord laughing villainous.
I hope you enjoyed it! And for the re-rereaders who already read the previous version: I hope you liked the newest version. :P
Almost forgot the disclaimer!
I don't own everything in here, except the idea, the lord and The Ancient Commander.
2 OC's so far, only a few more will come in the story. :)
Who is the leader? Will Bowser be saved? Will our 3 heroes succeed? Who are the next 2 smashers (I think you know who already). Will I stop asking this stupid questions (XD)? You'll see next time. I appreciate reviews. Please, don't say anything bad about this fic, because I'm still a newbie fanfic writer, so please R&R!
Kidnapped smashers:
Bowser
Smashers:
Mario, Luigi, Peach
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