4/11/18: All chapters from here on forward will be remastered in a way.
8/25/17: This story is now back after a short time of it being deleted. Thank you all who were patient.
Here is the remake to chapter one with a few spelling corrections and some more detail, enjoy!
Loud House belongs to Chris Savino/Nickelodeon
Ghost Rider + Related Characters belong to Marvel Comics
Royal Woods, Michigan. Year:2017
In the town of Royal Woods, Michigan lives a large family with 10 daughters named Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn jr, Lucy, Lana, Lola, Lisa, and Lily. Next is their only brother Lincoln Loud. Lincoln has recently celebrated his 12th birthday where the only developments for him was some height gain and a cracking voice. Lincoln has always known that he was different from all his sister. He didn't have a interest or hobby that made him unique. But very soon, Lincoln will become the most supernatural superhero of all time and save his family, friends, and world from a great evil that threatens the lives of even the earth's mightiest heroes!
Our story starts in the Royal Woods Mall where we see our soon-to-be-Hero shopping for his favorite comic book series with his 18 year old sister Lori Loud.
"Hurry up Twerp, Me and Bobby have a date tonight and I don't want your "Face-Crappy" comic to make me late!" Said Lori
Annoyed, Lincoln responds with "It's Ace-Savvy Lori, And don't worry, You won't be late to your date with (in a kissy tone) Bobby Boo-Boo Bear!"
Lori then shot a irritated glare at Lincoln as he kept a smug smile on his face.
"Do you want me to turn you into a human pretzel?" Lori questioned
"I don't know if (in an even kissier tone) Bobby Boo-Boo Bear would like if it you did that!" teased Lincoln
"Oh, So that's how it's going to be?" asked Lori as she placed her phone into her pocket.
"Alright Twerp, prepare to become...Lincoln?" asked Lori as she noticed that Lincoln wasn't at his original spot anymore.
As after taking a deep breath, Lori sang out loud "Alright Lincoln, Come out, Come Out, wherever you are!"
"Oh Bobby Boo-Boo Bear, How I just love to literally call you cringeworthy pet names!" teased Lincoln from another isle.
"Well, What would Ronnie Ann think of her boyfriend being literally to afraid to face his older sister" Lori teased
After a few seconds of looking around, Lori felt something small and soft hit her on the back of her head. She turned around to see Lincoln at the other end of the isle and saw that he threw a plush bear at her.
"Oh You Turd!" said Lori as she began to chase Lincoln out of the store.
After a good 10 minutes of chasing each other through the mall having a great time, Lori and Lincoln had been caught by a Security Officer and the Mall Manager.
The mall manager and the guard brought the two outside so they can leave the premises.
"AND NEVER COME BACK!" Yelled the mall manager
After hearing what his boss just said, the security guard began to whisper in the manager's ear.
"Uhh sir...Don't the Loud Family usually get most of their things off of layaway? And since they are a large family, We get a lot of money from their purchases?" asked the Security Guard.
After a few seconds of thought, The Manager realized what he just said and turned his attention to the Loud Siblings.
"Fine, You may come back but next time, Bring in a written apology for your actions tonight!" commanded the manager.
"Yes sir" answered both Lori and Lincoln as they both walked away to the family van.
Lincoln then turned to the audience and started talking.
"Wow, This is the first time that my family got a second chance to go back to a public business unlike that grocery store from last year when I wanted that Zombie cereal!" said Lincoln as he got in his seat.
"So Lincoln, Do you want to go to Burpin Burger?" asked Lori
"Sure, But don't you and Bobby have a date tonight?" said Lincoln
"Yeah, But as I was chasing you, I called and told him that I wanted to hang with you tonight and he literally understanded!" Lori answered as she pulled on the main road.
Little did the two know that soon both of their lives will change forever.
As the Loud Van drove down the highway, The driver and her brother began to talk, tell jokes(which they and the rest of their siblings keep secret from Luan), share secrets, listening to music, and having innocent Hoo-Hah Fun! Until their music was interrupted by a news broadcast, The two siblings listened in curiosity.
*Breaking News: We have Confirmation that The Fantastic Four has successfully subdued Dr. Doom and is currently bringing him to S.H.I.E.L.D headquarters so he can return to his nice, dark cell! In other news: Daily Bugle editor-in-chief .Jameson has released his new article called "Spider-Menace: cut the web's" wait...really? Is he still doing this? Heh, Crazy old man. Now back to your Music Station!* The radio begins to play music once more.
Lori then turned off the radio and said in a tone of disgust "Web-Headed Menace!"
Lincoln quickly turned his head to his sister with a face of shock that spelled shocked.
Lori began to smile and say "Just kidding, Lincoln."
"Lori?" asked Lincoln
"Hmm?" nswered Lori
"All of those heroes, The Avengers, New Warriors, Alpha Flight, X-Men, The Fantastic Four, they are just so amazing!" Said Lincoln
"Yeah, You was only 3 years old when The Avengers first came into play." stated Lori
"Rad, Imagine if I had superpowers!" Lincoln beamed
Just then, Lincoln started to hear laughter coming from his left. He looked in that direction to see his older sister laughing.
"What's so funny?" questioned Lincoln who made a scowl on his face.
"It...it's just you? Superpowers? Lincoln... If you somehow gained superpowers, Then I hope that it's the power to regenerate so that chip in your tooth will finally get fixed!" said Lori while trying to catch her breath from laughing so hard.
"That's a fake laugh." Stated an annoyed Lincoln
"It's Real!" Lori replied
After a few minutes of arguing on whether Lori's laugh was real or fake. Without warning, An upcoming car quickly changes from the left lane to the right where the Loud van was driving and crashed head first. Due to how old the van is and the speed of the impact, Lincoln's body lunged forward very hard which made his seat belt snap, making launch out of his seat and crashed through the windshield.
As Lincoln flew in the air, The world seemed to go into slow motion as he inched closer to the asphalt. As he finally hit the ground, he started roll on the ground as the pavement and rocks began to cut his skin and sliding on the road. After a few seconds, Lincoln finally stopped rolling and sliding as landed on his back.
All Lincoln could feel now is pain and nothing else. He struggled to turn his head to the crash site and saw that Lori was still in the van with her head resting on the steering wheel. Suddenly, the car which hit the van started to give off smoke through it's hood. Lincoln played enough GTA to know what happens next.
He tried to move but there was no success. Lincoln knew that his sister's time to go was near. Lincoln then noticed red liquid started to drop over his right eye.
It was blood.
Lincoln's eyes started to water as he looked up in the sky, Trying to find someone to help his sister.
"God...Oh God, I know your're up there, please send someone to save my sister, I'll do anything if she lives!" criedLincoln as his eyes started to flow tears.
Just then, Lincoln started to hear footsteps coming to him.
"Anything?" asked the mysterious voice.
End of chapter 1. Alright everybody, This was the remake of chapter one complete with spelling corrections and some more details. Hopefully certain parts of the news broadcast actually showed up this time. So earlier today, I went to see Guardians of the Galaxy 2 as a last day of school present and it was amazing! And now I'm officially a Junior in High School!
Facts/easter eggs:
1.) "Hoo-Hah fun" is a nod to Ben Grimm a.k.a The Thing from the Fantastic Four
2.) This Loud House Au, Lincoln is a mix between Daniel Ketch and Ronnie Reyes Ghost Rider.
Chapter 2 coming soon!
