Chapter 1: What if happen if Allen was a Girl…
For once many things could happen. One: I, as the author, would make her a tomboy because of Mrs. Hoshino Katsura. Two: There would be another female in the Dark Order. Three: Every one in the Order would be shock to find the girl not girly. (coughcough Like mecoughcough). Four: I would call her Alnita. And Five: Is it alright if I add in some of my characters, I mean come on it can't all DGM characters all the time you know what I mean? Alright here I go….
Elena Walker walked around the streets clueless. Aw man, I'm lost again.
She hated that. She always gets lost and she was tired of that. She has past the place about a million times already. Some people that had past her had said hello to her and asked if she was lost, and she would always answered no. It would go like this "Good day, boy" "Good day,Sir" "Are you lost, son?" "No, Sir." So many people have called her a boy so much that she eventually decided to be and act like a boy. Except, she had found out, that pretending to be a boy turns out to be a pain. The bindings on her chest were and keeping a man's appearance was a pain. She didn't need to put on any make-up for this she already had the looks (except for the fact that she doesn't have facial hair or thousands of wrinkles). And also she really hates putting on make-up. Her master agreed with her about pretending to be a boy. "You are the most ugliest idiot apprentice I have ever happen to find about. Really you don't even have any ass." She sighed. "Timcanpy!" She yelled. "Timcanpy!" A sudden fluttering golem flew around her. Then it flew ahead of her. "Wait," -She ran after it- "Tim!" She ran and ran, chasing the little thing. When it finally stopped, she faced a steep cliff. Tim was flying upward. "Oh okay. You want me to climb…." She looked up and gulped. Man was that thing steep. Then she looked at Timcanpy. "Alright, anything to become an Exorcist." She took a deep breath a started to climb. "Why did they build a building on a place like this?" She complained as she struggled to pull herself up.
Komui Lee was in his office assigning a mission to a Exorcist. "I think you what to do after that don't you?" Komui asked. The Exorcist nodded and head off. "Good Luck" Komui added before the man left the office. Komui stared sadly at his coffee. He didn't like his job at all. In fact, if it wasn't for the death of his parents, he and his sister wouldn't be here. He would be working at a medical hospital in China, earning tons of money for helping out patients, seeing happy smiles on their faces. And his sister, Lenali, would be in school and working hard to take care of their parents. He took a gulp of coffee. But it didn't. And now he's stuck here, giving the residents of the Dark Religious Order death missions. He had only joined it for the sake of his sister.
"Hey, Komui!" A voice called out from the other section of the office. "Come here for a sec. You gotta see this." Komui went over to see all of the scientists surround around the security monitors. A tall, blacked haired, Chinese girl stood observing the boy who was, now walking towards the front gate.
"Who's the Kid?" Komui asked. "Outsiders aren't allowed here."
"I don't know." One of the scientist called Johnny said. "But he climbed up that cliff."
"He's coming over here." Another scientist said.
"Why didn't you stop him on that cliff?" Komui asked Reever.
"Well he doesn't seem like an outsider." Reever told him. Komui squinted. He was pretty much blind. It seemed like an eternity since he has ever gotten his glasses. "Really?"
"Brother, look." The girl who was observing the monitors pointed to the small, golden golem next to the boy. "The kid has General Cross's Golem with him."
"Excuse, me!" the boy was at the front gate, looking for the gate. "I was sent here by General Marian Cross. I'm Allen Walker. Umm.. Can I have a talk with the leaders here?"
"A acquaintance of the General?" Johnny asked himself.
"The guy's still alive?" Another scientist said. "I thought he was dead."
"Everyone thought he was dead." Said another.
"He said he was sent here."-Reever turned to Komui- "But have you heard anything, Supervisor?"
Komui took a long gulp of his coffee before answering." Nothing"
"Alright." Reever sighed. In the microphone he said to the boy. "Go take the Gatekeeper's motive examination."
Elena wondered where'd the voice came from and soon found out it was coming out from the large statue. She turned it and said "Nice to meet you." Suddenly, the huge statue stretched forward, an inch away from her nose. Then it spoke "X-ray examination. Determining subject is human or Akuma." Huge lights seemed to have blazed out of it's eyes and shone on Allen. This was not what I have been expecting. She thought.
"Why isn't anything showing up? Is he a bug or something?" the Gatekeeper kept scanning Elena for several minutes until he spotted the star scar on her face. Was it a star? Or a pentacle? The Gatekeeper decided it was a pentacle and sounded the alarm. "Get this guy OUT! He's CURSED!!! He has the mark of the pentacle. That's the sign of the Akuma! An ally of the Millennium Earl! Out! out! out! out!..."
"What?—Wait—No—"Elena was stuttering out words from her mouth. Inside the Order, scientists were in shock. How did that Akuma found the Exorcist's headquarters?
The Gatekeeper still was screaming its head off. "Spy alert! Spy alert! Spy alert!"
"Hey!"-Reever asked 65- "Have you alerted the other Exorcists in the castle?"
The cyborg turned to him and said "Don't worry about it." He turned to Lenali, then reported "Kanda's almost here." On the screen there was a man coming swiftly to the Gatekeeper to see what was wrong. Allen first thought when she saw the man was 'Is that a flying woman with a sword?' When the man landed on top of the Gatekeeper, Elena knew she was wrong and step back. It was a man with long sleek hair tied up into a ponytail with his drawn sword.
"You got some guts coming out here all by yourself." He had a mean, bossy, grave Japanese voice and his face was dead serious. That whole sentence alone scared Allen as she continued to stumble on her words.
"W-Wait a second, there's been a misunderstanding!"
The man acted he didn't hear her. He took out his sword (mugen) and muttered. "With my Mugen, I'll slice you in half." he jumped out the Gatekeeper's head and hit the floor with a bright light. It was such a force that Allen had to activate her own innocence. The man saw the claw and thought she was attacking. He raised his sword and sliced her arm. Elena stumbled back from the pain. She was shock when she saw the deep cut in the anti-akuma weapon.
"Y-you damage my arm." She said.
The man couldn't care less." What is that arm of yours?" He touched his mugen's blade.
"It's an anti-akuma weapon. I'm an Exorcist." Elena said firmly.
"What?" the man asked then turned to the Gatekeeper. "Gatekeeper!"
The Gatekeeper was still sobbing. "But I'm pretty sure I saw his pentacle! What would I do if he was actually an Akuma?"
"I'm human!" Elena banged on the gate. "I might be a little cursed, so? I'm still 100 human."
Again the man touched the blade of his mugen. "Very well then, we will know if you are an akuma or not after I checked your insides"He raised his sword, which began to have a yellowy glow, and said to. Elena "With my Mugen, I'll slice you in half." He charged at Elena who started twitch.
"Hey! W-w-wait! Please wait! I'm telling you I'm not your enemy. You should have gotten a letter of introduction from Master Cross. T-to a person named Komui!"
All at once, the man stopped, the sword barely an inch from Elena's eyes. She was staring at it like it was poisoned or something. In her head, the only words that seemed to enter her mind was I'm going to die, I'm going to die, and I'm going to die. She squished herself against the wall.
"From the General? A letter of introduction?" asked the man. He didn't lower his sword.
"Y-y-yeah to a person named Komui…" Elena said shakily. She stood frozen.
Inside the Science Department, Komui was just finishing his muffin when he heard that. Everyone in the room turned and stared at him. How embrassing it might have been. Komui immediately pointed to a random scientist and said "You, over there. Look through my desk."
The man stared at the mountains of scattered books, paperwork, bills, notes, letters, and personal items mounted on the desk. Cobwebs were found along with it. "That horrible---" The man twitched.
"Komui" Everyone groaned. The Chinese man took a look at the group and then said -"I'll help ya." -and went to search for the letter. Outside, the Japanese man hasn't lowered his sword down yet.
"Scary." Elena squeaked.
Komui picked up a few letters and read them off. "Is it this one? Nope, How about this one? No again. This one isn't either." All at once, the man next to Komui found the folded letter. It read to Komui, from Cross. "I found it, Supervisor!"
"Read it to me!" Komui commanded. With a shaking voice, the man read out loud. "Dear Komui. I am sending you a little brat named Allen Walker. Sincerely, General Cross Marian."- there was a long pause after that- "Well, there you go. I'm going to get more coffee." And went off.
"Geez, Komui, It would help one day if you clean your damn desk once in a full moon!" Reever yelled. Then he yelled into the microphone. "Gatekeeper, let them in."
At once, the huge steel doors opened, revealing the entrance to the Dark Order. But Elena and the man froze from their spots. Finally, the man, Kanda, withdraws his sword into his sheath and continued to stare at the girl with a dangerous look. Suddenly, a metal tray came out of nowhere, whacking Kanda's head very hard. Both turned to see a 17 years-old girl, in uniform, next to them. She had her shiny, sleek, black hair up into pigtails and wore the Dark Order's women uniform that included a black turtle-neck shirt, a very short miniskirt, and a pair of black boots. It made Elena jealous of the girl's hair. I want that kind of hair, too. She had told her Master about having long hair, before he said no, and you will look better with short hair. Elena hated wearing skirts and dresses. To her, it always feels discriminating. She had only wore a dress once, when she was a little girl. But then she found out that wearing pants are warmer, better to move in, doesn't show your scabby legs, and protects your legs from getting scratch from many plants and other miscellaneous things.
"Go in." Lenali pointed to the entrance with a mean look. "If you don't go in the door's going to close." Then she walked in. Kanda, still rubbing his head, and Elena, still scared to death, followed suit. The 2 huge, steel doors slammed behind them. Once all of them where inside, Linali turned and revealed a warm, welcoming smile.
"Welcome to the Dark Order." She said, holding the metal tray close to her chest. "I'm Linali Lee. And that-"she pointed to Kanda "-is Kanda." Elena decided to make friends with Kanda once and for all. Hesitantly, she offered a hand. "Nice to meet you" The man just gave her a cold mean stare.
"I don't touch cursed people" he left Elena shaking.
"Oh, don't worry about him"- Lenali said with her cheery smile-"You'll get used to that. Come-on I'll show you around and then you can meet my brother, Komui." She turned and left. Elena took a moment before following her iinto the Black Religious Order. A moment before entering her new home.
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'K so like I hope you guys like it in full detail. This is really my first one. Please review. I don't really care if you put in you suck or anything