Hello! This is my first story, I just joined FanFiction on Tuesday, November 1st, 2011, but I have been reading stories on this website for almost 2 years! You can read why I didn't join sooner on my profile… Anyway, I hope you like my story! It is going to totally twist Yu Gi Oh up!
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Me: Hey, hey, hey! It's 2012! I am REDOING THIS STORY! YAY!
Lexi: Good for you, now they can actually be able to read you story! And, btw, it is actually January 26, 2012.
Me: Don't make me come over there!
Lexi: *Cowers in a corner*
Me: That's what I thought! Now, on with the story! R&R!
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Disclaimer: I don't own Yu Gi Oh. Damn it!
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I walked out of my private jet, head high, glasses on, ready to show the world what I was made of.
My outfit, a total ten btw, was:
Shirt: Purple and Navy Blue Sweatshirt- Juicy Couture Pants: Purple and Navy Blue Sweatpants: Purple and Navy Blue - Juicy Couture Burberry messenger bag, which
Shoes: Black Boots- UGG AUSTRALIA Bailey Blings
Bag: Navy Blue, Purple, and Black Messenger Bag- BURBERRY
Sunglasses: Navy Blue and Silver- BURBERRY bracelet, earrings, and heart pendant, Jewelry: Silver Heart Earrings, Charm Bracelet, Pendant (All Silver)- Tiffany & Co.
My long hair was in a silky, high ponytail, and my lips shimmering in sheer Glossip Girl lip-gloss, blueberry flavoring. I was getting stares from every one, which made me feel even more confident and even sexier as I already was.
"Hey there, hot stuff. Wanna check out the bathrooms, I could give you a tour, if you know what I mean." he waggled his eyebrows suggestively.
Said the guy who thinks he's it, but he is pretty hot. He has blond hair, piercing green eyes, and decked in Abercrombie and Fitch. Not to mention Axe, hate that stuff, it is so fake. Just like Aeropostale.
I turned around, and gave him the hottest smile possible. I then winked just to provoke him a little more. He slowly led his hands around my waist, as I slowly backed away. When he tried the maneuver again, I hatched my plan. I kicked him where the sun doesn't shine.
"Holy shit!" He groaned in pain.
"Watch out who you mess with, hot stuff!" I sneered at him.
I walked away, not caring about the odd stares I was getting because of the little incident that just occurred. Hey! A girl needs to show she isn't afraid or scared to do anything, ya know?
As I walked toward my limousine, I thought these exact words that I knew would bring Domino to its knees' "Watch out Domino, here comes the new queen!"
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Do you like it? Yes? No? I want 3 reviews by tomorrow, please? Even if I don't get at least 3, I will still, hopefully, update this by tomorrow. Who is this mysterious character that I don't even describe to you as? You don't know what color hair she has, eyes, or anything! If you look at my profile, it will give you many hints to my mysterious aura!
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Me: So… What did you think? I didn't really change any dialogue, just edited it, made it easier to read.
Lexi: I personally thought it was a BIG improvement from before!
Me: Thank you! I appreciate it! So, if you guys want me to improve even MORE of this story, REVIEW! THANKS! I APPRECIATE IT!
