Hey everyone! Just finished a poam that I had to create for English class. It was really difficult and I'm not usually very poetic but after I finished this, it reminded my sister strongly of Fai so thats why I'm putting up. Its a poam from Kurogane's view (Who knew he was so poetic? lol)
I hope you enjoy it and please review to tell me what you think. I hope I get a good grade in my class xD
-Hinata888
Beautifully Fallen
I wish to talk to him but don't know when
For he's a disaster with a beautiful touch
This boy is so Beautifully fallen
And when I stare at his eyes of blue gem
I feel deep sadness and sorrow, very much
He's a flower, budding on it's green stem
This boy is so beautifully fallen
Fear rises in him with every hit or punch
I wish to talk to him but don't know when
And when he cries all alone in the den
I don't know what to do, except to just flinch
His sobs are too much for me now and then
He needs someone to love and comfort him
If only it were me, if it isn't much
His frail body goes limp as his eyes dim
I only cry and wipe the tears from my chin
For this boy is long gone, under my soft touch
I wish to talk to him but don't know when
For this boy is so beautifully fallen
-Grace Cook 4-49-09
Well, I hope you like it ^_^