Rachel Berry went on her computer. She was so nervous about the review for her new story. About 6 months ago, she had started a account and had been writing an abundance of stories about her favorite TV shows.
Rachel liked writing and even though she was usually full of things to say in school, her writing exposed the more calm side of her. She especially loved getting reviews.
She had written a story awhile back which was a one-liner. It was meant to be stupid. She had gotten sarcastic reviews about it but they meant all knew it was a joke.
Recently, she had written a story for another one of her favorite shows. The story was a bit on the short side but it was still good and funny. The new review was for this story.
She had never gotten a bad review for her stories. She knew it happened though. Her friend, Kurt, had been flamed multiple times even though he put a lot of work into his stories. Rachel didn't mind constructive criticism: she liked that people put their valuable time into helping people like her improve their writing. She hated reviews that just said her writing was bad and gave a stupid reason.
Rachel took a deep breath and looked at her computer screen. Her face grew bright red with anger. She clicked on the "Reply to Review" button and began to type.
Okay guys, that's the first chapter! I'm going to try something new in this story, if you give me a question on the reviews, I'll respond to them at the end of each chapter! Bye!