Lost_Angel_Suigintou-This is a strawbeery panic themed poem i love it to death so tell me what u think

Nagisa-chan-This is from Onee-Sama's point of veiw

Shizuma-chan-there's no need to call me Onee-sama all the time my little Nagisa-chan...

Nagisa-chan-But i like to On-ee-sa-ma. *giggles softly*

Shizuma-chan- Oh really Na-gi-sa-ch-an *slams her against the wall kissing her*

Me-....Anyway...on with the poem! ^_^

Nagisa-chan *blush*

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And then she was there,
And it was as if
The whole of your life
Had contracted

To that small moment,
That kiss,
That embrace,
And everything

Outside of that
Was as nothing,
Was a tale told
By a madman

On the edge
Of the world,
And you wanted her
Forever in that hold,

With the lips touching,
With the arms
Embracing you,
Her breasts

And yours
Feeling each the other
Closer than the moon
And stars and night,

And you wanted nothing
To end it all,
Wanted all for eternity,
Deep loving eternity.

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Me-What you think???