Autor's note: Hello guys, How are you?
It's my first history in English. I'm brazilian, so my first lenguage is portuguese. Cos this, I need help myself for learn other lenguage.
Now, wveryday I will writer one funny chapter; simple and short. I will be training English writting texts! For me is better, and if I can learn, I don't care!
So, Could you help me, please? All things wrongs in this text, please, tell me! Words, expressions, inaproprieted sentences, and others!
Thank you so much for your help.
Disclaimer: Bleach and all characters belong to Tite Kubo.
Couple: HitsuHina
Chapters so far: 1
Good read!
Chapter 1: different
words: 121
theme: word different
— Shiro-chan! — Hinamori said sitting on couch.
— Hitsugaya Taichou — corrected he: — well, What's happen?
— How is to kiss? — asked curiously.
— How I can know? — answer Hitsugaya embarrassed.
— Hm, I don't know — Hinamori Completed: — But, everybody say that you are very "famous".
He sighs: — And? It 's normal. I'm a Captain, right?
— No, It's not this type of famous, is different. — Hinamori corrected herself.
— As different? — Asked Hitsugaya curious.
— "Hot". — She smiled.
Hitsugaya nod; but very ruddy.
— Really? — He emphazed.
— Yay!
— Well, I don't care, and I don't know anything about stupid things. — concluded nervous.
— Seriously?
— Yes.
— Kyaah! — said Hinamori hugging him: — You're so kawaii!
— Why?
— Nothing! — She concluded.
— C'mon! Let me go!
Well, Do u like? I hope yes!
A lot of wrongs? Please, would say "not" ruehreuhreur :v
Tomorrow I retourn!
See you soon!
Kisses and bites :3