My first post is a multi chapter. This is a idea I had while drifting off in class. I really want some reviews. And since I know there are haters go ahead and hate mother fukahs. The story is basically a random pick. No character bashing, No nothing. Just my very new style of writing. Its called experience. Which is very new to a lot of writers out there. So yeah. Anyway I hope you love this and hit me up with some major reviews. Thanks.

Sasuke POV

We sat at the corner waiting for our bus to come pick us up for summer camp. Me and Naruto's moms sort of did this to get us out the house for what ever they had planned to do with their husbands. Also so we wouldn't be stuck at home with our minds in the gutter.

What I hated most about summer camp was Karin. Everybody there hated Karin. She was always trying to get laid. She slept with almost every guy on campus and cheated on her clueless boyfriend with five other guys. The bus finally pulled up as me and Naruto got on the bus and sat next to Sakura. "Sup Sakura?" Naruto treated her as if she was one of the guys. And she acted as if she was one of the guys. Don't get this misunderstood though. Sakura is as straight as a pencil led. "Sup Naruto?" She smiled as her braces shined in the sunlight. I suddenly felt something running their hand down my chest. Then there was a couple slapping noises and I heard Naruto say "YOUR SUCH A FUCKING SLUT KARIN!" Naruto had pimp slapped Karin unconscious.

Everybody on the bus who saw would have something to talk about on the long ride to camp.

At Summer Camp Konoha Which Is Now Normal POV

The camp was beautiful. On the poster and in real life, which was rare, because usually it would be some dumb old fucked up run-down piece of shit and waste of money. "ATTENTION ALL PAIN IN THE ASSES!" Kakashi the owner of the camp called from a large outdoor stage that was surrounded by a lot of teenagers. They were restless, loud, and in the mood to talk while authority was speaking. "ATTENTION ALL MOTHER FUCKING PAIN IN THE ASSES!" Everybody got quiet as Kakashi sensei continued speaking. "As you all know this is camp Konoha. A very well known camp." He was suddenly interrupted by the teens who started talking again. "SHUT. UP!" They got quiet. "Listen. Here are the rules that you aren't going to follow. No drinking. No smoking. No physical contact that will lead to death or pregnancy. No foul language and No trying to murder Karin. " There was an awkward silence which was soon broken by Kakashi who had the students say the camp pledge.

" I plan to not make anybodies life here hell. That is the authorities job. I am here to associate and get off my lazy ass. I am a student here and it is my job to know what my job is, whatever that means." Kakashi walked off stage and Mr. Eugene the third spoke over the intercom that all students better find a cabin.

Naruto POV

I was walking to my cabin. Which was the last one because all the others were filled. I walked in forgetting I looked like a ten. Karin greeted me with a seductive walk and a sluttish smile. "Naruto Kun will be sleeping with me." I heard her say as she left the cabin. "You're her kun?" Shikamaru shook his head at me as he continued drinking out of his water bottle. " No. Its just that Karin's a hoe." Shikamaru laughed as Hinata entered the cabin in a beautiful sundress. "There's my Chan!" I walked up to her and kissed her on the lips softly. " Ew. There's my lunch." Shikamaru said as his face turned into playful disgust. I stopped kissing Hinata and looked at Shikamaru.

"See Shikamaru? That's why you don't have a girlfriend now asshole." I told him. Hinata giggled to herself as she walked over to where my stuff was and began unpacking it for me. Hinata had became my girlfriend last month and she was already acting like my wife. I lost my virginity to her and everything. She was my first girl kiss. Sasuke was my first kiss period. And my second.

The happy moments suddenly faded as Sakura walked in pissed, Sasuke walked in pissed, and Karin walked in with them. "Kakashi said we will be bunking with sluttish bitch for the summer." Sasuke looked up at the cabin sealing. "Dear Lord, what did I do ?"

Hinata rolled her eyes at Karin as she twirled her hair at me while popping her gum and smiling like a sluttish ass bitch. "Didn't I just kick your ass earlier?" I asked her as she continued a ' how to get a man failure routine'. "But I want to start over. How about we make love faces?" Sakura slapped the back of Karin's head sending her to the ground. "How about you go to hell and never return?" Karin slowly got up and made a come back I wasn't expecting. "With you Sakura I'm already in it." The whole cabin 'oooooooooooooooohed at Karin's comeback. "TRIFLING ASS BITCH!"

Karin exited the cabin angrily followed behind an angry Sakura who was followed by Shikamaru who started screaming "BITCH FIGHT!"

We all ran out of our cabins to see the epic bitch fight between Karin and Sakura. This was going to be one hell of a summer.

So what do you think about this fic so far? Do you like it? Any grammar mistakes NEED to be told . Thanks though!