This is a story involving Sora, Riku, Axel and Roxas. Soon to be more I am just unsure. More reviews more likely to pay more attention to this story.. sorry. Thee more shallows, you should really listen to their stuff, their songs made the story.
Chapter one It's a party.
When it begins, sound rushes in and drowns out everything. Sideways in bed, he covers his ears, the roar is deafening.
When it won't quit brown hair staggers up and into the hall, but out there it's louder.
'somebody's party?'
He starts to yell. "hey, buddy, hey! Hey, buddy, please! Would you quiet down? You're killing me. It's 2 am, I'm trying to sleep!"
But the sound keeps going, 'til the walls are shaking. No one answers though he keep running around and banging on doors. It seems strange there's no one home.
He starts to wonder 'Who's making that noise if I'm up here all alone?'
But then the pitch hits and he stops caring because what was piercing is now controlled, and there's no who and no why and there's no conflict
He breathes it out and lets it go.
He hums a song and when he sings the sound is gone, lights turn on. Then the door opens wide. Three stagger out and sing along
He rubs his eyes,
they come closer? He trembles back in fear.
The blond tips his hat, silver holds up the whisky, and the red head puffs smoke.
"Welcome to neverland, come inside."
It's a party.
good? bad? let me know! thanks! i think it was a little bit too confusing