Hey well this is only my second fic ever! Umm yeah. Please read and tell me
how bad it is. Also tell me if I have character flaws. Oh and thanks 2 my
wonderful friend who read my work before I typed it and told me I couldn't
spell (my computer doesn't have spell check)- joshrox116 and thanks Kahli
for telling me that certain people do not do certain things. One last
thing, if you like this you would probably enjoy
which is a good story
written by one of my other friends, Malekith.
Disclaimers - I do not own (well you know I would love to keep them all locked up in my roof but not all dreams can come true) Pansy, Milicent, Draco, Crabbe, Goyle, Harry, Ron, Ginny (her name is mentioned), Hermione, Neville, Blaise and Snape BUT the occaisonal Snape change (instead of shape change he he he. Sorry), Blaise's characterictics, Victoria, Ellen, Sebastion and the mysterious girl who is yet to be named (if you have any name ideas please tell me because I have no ideas). Please note that the mystery girl has been at Hogwarts the same amount of time the rest of them were/are.
Rating - PG13+:- low level sex themes and coarse language (I don't know how much but there will be some!)
Now the story begins!
CHAPTER ONE - 'A MYSTERY GIRL IN SLYTHERIN'
She opened her eyes and met the greenest eyes she had ever seen.
She closed her eyes in an effort to make him leave.
Her eyes opened again and the green eyes were still the same.
She welcomed his warm embrace, it was like a love she had never ever felt before.
She put her head back on her pillow and those brilliant green eyes had been replaced by red, snake-like slits.
A cold sweat covered the thin body of the young girl.
# # # # # # # # # #
"Get up everbody, quick. We cannot be the last ones to breakfast. Draco promised he would sit with us!" Pansy said happily.
Everyone got up and got ready, except for the blonde in the corner bed. She was already dressed and had been for at least two hours.
# # # # # # # # # #
"Look, look. There he is!" Milicent whispered.
"Does my hair look all right?" Pansy asked quickly.
"Oh, it is gorgeous!" Victoria exclaimed.
"How do you get your hair like that?" Milicent asked.
"Well you just take." Pansy started.
"Shut-up girls he is almost at the table." Ellen said.
Next to them a quiet fifth year was trying to eat her breakfast without laughing or throwing up.
Draco, Crabbe, Goyle, Blaise and Sebastian sat down at the Slytherin table. Draco payed no attention to the four whimpering girls and sat down next to the mysterious blonde and began eating breakfast just as if he did it everyday of his life*.
Three invisible trumpets began their morning ritual, then in came the owls.
Three letters came for draco and five for the girl next to him.
The girl gathered her letters and weak towards the door of the Great Hall.
"Who is that girl?" Pansy asked "She wasn't here last year!"
"But she was." Draco replied.
"Sticking up for her now Malfoy?" Milicent retorted.
"No," Draco said icily "She was here last year. She had magenta hair though."
# # # # # # # # # #
Down the many steps towards the dungeon came a tall, thin blonde with one brilliant green eye and one sparkling blue eye.
The common room door opened without a password, as if it knew that she was thinking those two magical words "Spectamur Agendo".
The young girl walked towards the fire and chose the seat that was turned a different way to the rest, so that even if a really tall person came looking for her they wouldn't find her.
She sat down and opened her letters.
The first three she burnt without opening, the fourth she liked, it was romantic and funny and it wasn't even about her.
The fifth letter she hated, it made her cry and girls aren't supposed to cry, but she kept it anyway.
"... I know you are in here. I saw you run I here." A young man called out.
The bell rang.
"Saved by the bell. I'll talk to you during dinner then." Then the young man left quickly.
The young girl grabbed her letters and her bag from the next to the fire and walked out of the common room towards her first and favourite lesson, potions.
# # # # # # # # # #
"Hello Potty, Weasel," Draco drawled "See your robes grew over the summer. How many dinners did you have to go without?"
"N-n-n-none." Ron stammered.
"Oh did you sell that crazy sister of yours then?" Draco asked.
"Why would he want to do that? We wouldn't want to break you heart**! Harry replied.
"What are you going on about? Would I want to be anywhere near that stupid Weasley girl!" Draco spat.
"She isn't stupid!" Ron yelled.
"Just like Granger isn't a mudblood," Draco replied cooly "And everyone knows she is."
Ron pulled out his wand, but at the same time Seamus and Dean had run over to hold him back.
"Fighting again Mr Wealsey? Well aren't you lucky that I stepped in before you got a detention. Now everyone inside and open your books to page" Snape paused at this point "69, we are making love potions today."
Girls sqeuled with delight and everyone filed in.
Only two people, it seemed noticed a change in Snape, Neville and a tall blonde who was standing in a shadowy corner.
# # # # # # # # # #
Snape walked behind Neville and examined his potion. "Well done Neville, excellent."
The whole class was silent.
"Did you help him Miss Granger?" Snape asked in a tone that could only be described as, well, nice.
Hermione relied shakily, "No Professor. I didn't."
"Well Neville has improved. Lets see, 30 points to Gryffindor."
The class was in shock.
The bell made a resounding ring.
The class was safe from being furtherly shocked.
"Please bring out you samples for me before you leave." Snape said with an air of, niceness.
The class took out their samples and left the dungeon confused except one girl; a tall girl with weird eyes who left with a smile from ear to ear.
# # # # # # # # # #
A young blonde girl picked up two goblets of pumkin juice and walked to the end of the table.
Five paces behind her was a striking young man with dark brown eyes and light brown/dark blond hair watching the girl's every step.
She sat down at the end of the table, poured something in one of the drinks and turned to see Blaise's smiling face.
The was taken and drunk in one swift movement, almost as if Blaise was a puppet.
Then he just began talking about anything and everything.
"...well I like her, I mean really, really like her but you know Draco. Never letting anyone do anything he doesn't approve of, and if I told him I wanted to ask her out he would surely banish me from his inner circle. So because he is in charge it is all his choice. If there was no Draco then there would be no leader and..."
The girl took something out of her pocket and force fed it to Blaise. She didn't want him blabbing about everything to anyone.
Then she walked away in the direction of the Slytherin dormitories.
She had people to meet.
Unknowingly, about 10 metres behind her was another blond.
This one seeking the girl he was following as his prey, just as if he was a lion following a deer.
# # # # # # # # # #
The young girl sat down near the fire, trying to be engulfed by it's warmth.
She heard footsteps.
She got up and walked over to where the footsteps were coming from.
"Well, well, well. What do we have here?" Draco said icily "A poor little deer all alone. And what are these?"
Draco saw the letters in the girls robes and reached for them.
She pulled away.
"What's wrong, is that the last letter your parents ever sent you?"
The face of the girl turned from cowardice to pure hatred.
"Ahh, good. I hit the spot. Now tell me, where is it?"
The girl reached for her wand and waved it in one swish movement.
Draco fell down.
He was alive, but only just.
Well that is the first chapter please review and tell me how bad/good it is.
* Well technically he does eat breakfast every day of his life but not sitting next to her.
* * This is a refrence to the story my friend wrote (see the link at the top)
Disclaimers - I do not own (well you know I would love to keep them all locked up in my roof but not all dreams can come true) Pansy, Milicent, Draco, Crabbe, Goyle, Harry, Ron, Ginny (her name is mentioned), Hermione, Neville, Blaise and Snape BUT the occaisonal Snape change (instead of shape change he he he. Sorry), Blaise's characterictics, Victoria, Ellen, Sebastion and the mysterious girl who is yet to be named (if you have any name ideas please tell me because I have no ideas). Please note that the mystery girl has been at Hogwarts the same amount of time the rest of them were/are.
Rating - PG13+:- low level sex themes and coarse language (I don't know how much but there will be some!)
Now the story begins!
CHAPTER ONE - 'A MYSTERY GIRL IN SLYTHERIN'
She opened her eyes and met the greenest eyes she had ever seen.
She closed her eyes in an effort to make him leave.
Her eyes opened again and the green eyes were still the same.
She welcomed his warm embrace, it was like a love she had never ever felt before.
She put her head back on her pillow and those brilliant green eyes had been replaced by red, snake-like slits.
A cold sweat covered the thin body of the young girl.
# # # # # # # # # #
"Get up everbody, quick. We cannot be the last ones to breakfast. Draco promised he would sit with us!" Pansy said happily.
Everyone got up and got ready, except for the blonde in the corner bed. She was already dressed and had been for at least two hours.
# # # # # # # # # #
"Look, look. There he is!" Milicent whispered.
"Does my hair look all right?" Pansy asked quickly.
"Oh, it is gorgeous!" Victoria exclaimed.
"How do you get your hair like that?" Milicent asked.
"Well you just take." Pansy started.
"Shut-up girls he is almost at the table." Ellen said.
Next to them a quiet fifth year was trying to eat her breakfast without laughing or throwing up.
Draco, Crabbe, Goyle, Blaise and Sebastian sat down at the Slytherin table. Draco payed no attention to the four whimpering girls and sat down next to the mysterious blonde and began eating breakfast just as if he did it everyday of his life*.
Three invisible trumpets began their morning ritual, then in came the owls.
Three letters came for draco and five for the girl next to him.
The girl gathered her letters and weak towards the door of the Great Hall.
"Who is that girl?" Pansy asked "She wasn't here last year!"
"But she was." Draco replied.
"Sticking up for her now Malfoy?" Milicent retorted.
"No," Draco said icily "She was here last year. She had magenta hair though."
# # # # # # # # # #
Down the many steps towards the dungeon came a tall, thin blonde with one brilliant green eye and one sparkling blue eye.
The common room door opened without a password, as if it knew that she was thinking those two magical words "Spectamur Agendo".
The young girl walked towards the fire and chose the seat that was turned a different way to the rest, so that even if a really tall person came looking for her they wouldn't find her.
She sat down and opened her letters.
The first three she burnt without opening, the fourth she liked, it was romantic and funny and it wasn't even about her.
The fifth letter she hated, it made her cry and girls aren't supposed to cry, but she kept it anyway.
"... I know you are in here. I saw you run I here." A young man called out.
The bell rang.
"Saved by the bell. I'll talk to you during dinner then." Then the young man left quickly.
The young girl grabbed her letters and her bag from the next to the fire and walked out of the common room towards her first and favourite lesson, potions.
# # # # # # # # # #
"Hello Potty, Weasel," Draco drawled "See your robes grew over the summer. How many dinners did you have to go without?"
"N-n-n-none." Ron stammered.
"Oh did you sell that crazy sister of yours then?" Draco asked.
"Why would he want to do that? We wouldn't want to break you heart**! Harry replied.
"What are you going on about? Would I want to be anywhere near that stupid Weasley girl!" Draco spat.
"She isn't stupid!" Ron yelled.
"Just like Granger isn't a mudblood," Draco replied cooly "And everyone knows she is."
Ron pulled out his wand, but at the same time Seamus and Dean had run over to hold him back.
"Fighting again Mr Wealsey? Well aren't you lucky that I stepped in before you got a detention. Now everyone inside and open your books to page" Snape paused at this point "69, we are making love potions today."
Girls sqeuled with delight and everyone filed in.
Only two people, it seemed noticed a change in Snape, Neville and a tall blonde who was standing in a shadowy corner.
# # # # # # # # # #
Snape walked behind Neville and examined his potion. "Well done Neville, excellent."
The whole class was silent.
"Did you help him Miss Granger?" Snape asked in a tone that could only be described as, well, nice.
Hermione relied shakily, "No Professor. I didn't."
"Well Neville has improved. Lets see, 30 points to Gryffindor."
The class was in shock.
The bell made a resounding ring.
The class was safe from being furtherly shocked.
"Please bring out you samples for me before you leave." Snape said with an air of, niceness.
The class took out their samples and left the dungeon confused except one girl; a tall girl with weird eyes who left with a smile from ear to ear.
# # # # # # # # # #
A young blonde girl picked up two goblets of pumkin juice and walked to the end of the table.
Five paces behind her was a striking young man with dark brown eyes and light brown/dark blond hair watching the girl's every step.
She sat down at the end of the table, poured something in one of the drinks and turned to see Blaise's smiling face.
The was taken and drunk in one swift movement, almost as if Blaise was a puppet.
Then he just began talking about anything and everything.
"...well I like her, I mean really, really like her but you know Draco. Never letting anyone do anything he doesn't approve of, and if I told him I wanted to ask her out he would surely banish me from his inner circle. So because he is in charge it is all his choice. If there was no Draco then there would be no leader and..."
The girl took something out of her pocket and force fed it to Blaise. She didn't want him blabbing about everything to anyone.
Then she walked away in the direction of the Slytherin dormitories.
She had people to meet.
Unknowingly, about 10 metres behind her was another blond.
This one seeking the girl he was following as his prey, just as if he was a lion following a deer.
# # # # # # # # # #
The young girl sat down near the fire, trying to be engulfed by it's warmth.
She heard footsteps.
She got up and walked over to where the footsteps were coming from.
"Well, well, well. What do we have here?" Draco said icily "A poor little deer all alone. And what are these?"
Draco saw the letters in the girls robes and reached for them.
She pulled away.
"What's wrong, is that the last letter your parents ever sent you?"
The face of the girl turned from cowardice to pure hatred.
"Ahh, good. I hit the spot. Now tell me, where is it?"
The girl reached for her wand and waved it in one swish movement.
Draco fell down.
He was alive, but only just.
Well that is the first chapter please review and tell me how bad/good it is.
* Well technically he does eat breakfast every day of his life but not sitting next to her.
* * This is a refrence to the story my friend wrote (see the link at the top)