a very short oneshot. i feel like i haven't put much out in a while and i wanted to try what i've seen other authors do. it's only 160 words.
Blood
The blood was all over his hands. It was all over his clothes. It was all of his knife.
He stared down at the lifeless blonde girl beneath him and stroked the hair out of her face. He reached down slowly, slowly, slowly, until his lips were almost with hers.
"Hey! I think I see someone!" the sheriff's voice was loud in the background and the blonde boy jumped up and ran away.
When the sheriff reached the body he stared into the dead eyes of the blonde beauty. Closer and closer and closer and then…black.
~~rokunami~~
"Whoa…that was a pretty scary." Roxas, wide-eyed, looked down at his girlfriend Namine. She was currently cringing into his side, almost scared to tears.
"Y-yeah." She whispered.
"Hahaha!" he started laughing at her.
"Hey, what's that for? I'm seriously afraid!"
"You're just so cute when you're scared."
She blushed and cuddled closer into his side.
good? bad? should i not do this type of story again?
review please!