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John and Teyla story
Time running out
John and Teyla went through the gate and took a look around; all they saw was dirt and a lot of wind blowing their way. John and Teyla looks around hoping to find something on the planet that can explain what is causing the storm.
John: Yelling We need to get back to the gate.
Teyla: yelling How we don't know the way back to the gate.
John and Teyla start coughing. Teyla collapses while searching for the way back to the gate.
John: yelling TEYLA!!
John runs over to Teyla and carries her back to the way they came. John sees something and it's the gate. John puts Teyla down and starts coughing and dialing the gate back to Atlantis.
Atlantis
Gordin: Receiving incoming wormhole.
Weir: Raise the Shield
Gordin: wait Its Major Sheppard's IDC.
Weir: lower the shield.
Dr Weir waits for Major Sheppard and Teyla to get through.
Major Sheppard on radio: Dr Weir we coughing need a medical team standing by.
Weir: Medical team to the gate room. They're on the way.
John carries Teyla through to the other side.
Weir: What happened?
John coughing: There was a bad storm.
John passes out and the medical team along with Dr Beckett rushes over to John and Teyla.
Beckett: We need to get them to the Medical Bay now.
Medical Bay
Beckett: We need to quarantine them now.
Weir: Why what did you find?
Beckett: Their blood samples show some kind of virus that's attacking their body.
Weir: Is it contagious?
Beckett: It seems it might be. If we get a sample from the planet I may be able to know more.
John starts waking: Oh what the hell is going on?
Beckett walking over to John: Ah Major your awake.
John: Yeah, I am. What happened?
Weir: I thought you could tell us.
John: All I remember was walking around the planet and seeing so much dust and wind. We started coughing when we got further though the area and Teyla passed out and I carried her back to the gate.
Beckett: Was there anything unusual about the planet Major?
John: No not really. Why?
Beckett: We think you and Teyla are infected with some kind of virus and it seems it caused you and Teyla to pass out.
Teyla's monitor starts beeping alerting Dr Beckett
John: what's happening?
Beckett: She's gone into shock we need the crash cart now.
John lays there watching Teyla get shocked and still no change
Beckett: Come on Teyla breath.
TBC.....
Will Teyla live find out later in the story