ThunderClan:

Leader: Oakstar- light brown tom with amber eyes

Deputy: Squirrelfur- dark ginger tom with amber eyes

Medicine cat: Fawnstep- light brown she-cat with amber eyes

Warriors: Blazefire- ginger and white tom with amber eyes

Stormfang- dark grey tom with blue eyes

Hazelstripe- brown tabby she-cat with hazel eyes

Foxstep- russet tom with green eyes,

Apprentice, Ashpaw (light grey tabby she-cat with cool blue eyes)

Dustclaw- grey tabby tom with amber eyes

Mottledbird- mottled tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes,

Apprentice, Havenpaw (brown tabby and white she-cat with hazel eyes)

Rowanstrike- ginger and white tom with amber eyes

Mousepool- small grey and white she-cat with blue eyes

Shredear- dark grey tom with misty blue eyes, and a shredded ear

Firestorm- handsome ginger tom with green eyes

Briarclaw- chestnut brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes,

Apprentice, Pebblepaw (grey and white tom with blue eyes)

Queens: Dawnbird- cream pelted she-cat with amber eyes, expecting Stormfang's kits.

Robinsong- ginger she-cat with green eyes, expecting Squirrelfur's kits.

Elders: Mousypelt- old, cranky, mousy brown she-cat

ShadowClan:

Leader: Clawstar- black tom with amber eyes, and a white chest and tail tip

Deputy: Fernpelt- dark ginger she-cat with amber eyes

Medicine cat: Eaglefeather- old, mad, brown tom with unkempt fur and amber eyes,

Apprentice, Stonewing (light grey tabby tom with light blue eyes)

Warriors: Toadleap- black and white tom with amber eyes

Shadefrost- black and white she-cat with blue eyes

Molefur- dark brown tom with amber eyes,

Apprentice, Daypaw (golden she-cat with blue eyes)

Olivefur- black tom with amber eyes

Appleclaw- creamish, redish tom with green eyes

Wolfpelt- dark grey tom with blue eyes

Vinefrost- dark grey tom with amber eyes

Mossclaw- light grey and white she-cat with blue eyes

Weaselstripe- brown tabby tom with amber eyes,

Apprentice, Nightpaw (black tom with blue eyes)

Flamefall- ginger tom with green eyes

Icestorm- white she-cat with light silver tabby patches, and blue eyes

Hailstorm- silky furred grey tom with darker flecks

Rainfeather- long furred she-cat with dark grey fur and tabby markings

Queens: Spottedfrost- tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes, expecting Flamefall's kits.

RiverClan:

Leader: Mothstar- golden dappled she-cat with bright blue eyes

Deputy: Fishleap- ginger tabby tom with green eyes

Medicine Cat: Icewing- white she-cat with a ginger patch by her eyes, and green eyes,

Apprentice, Willowpaw (light grey tabby she-cat with blue eyes)

Warriors: Perchleap- black tom with amber eyes

Ravenfrost- black and white tom with amber eyes

Lilydew- light brown tabby and white she-cat with amber eyes

Foxflight- clumsy russet tom with green eyes

Springfoot- long-haired white she-cat with a blue eye, and a green eye

Redflight- mottled red tom with amber eyes

Owleyes- tawny tortoiseshell she-cat with amber eyes

Weedfur- brown tabby tom with amber eyes,

Apprentice, Patchpaw (black and white tom with amber eyes)

Reedflame- black tom with amber eyes

Ottercreek- brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes

Stormfrost- dark grey tom with blue eyes

Ripplestream- silver tabby tom with blue eyes

Lakesplash- ginger and white she-cat with blue eyes

Elders: Minnowfur- sleek, dark grey she-cat with blue eyes

Pikepelt- black tom with green eyes

WindClan:

Leader: Hopstar- mousy brown tom with amber eyes

Deputy: Harestreak- light brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: Tornclaw- black and white tom with a torn claw

Warriors: Doelight- light brown she-cat with amber eyes

Quickflash- lanky silver she with blue eyes

Thrushflight- ginger tom with amber eyes,

Apprentice, Kestrelpaw

Blueheart- blue grey she-cat with blue eyes

Moordawn- cream tabby tom with green eyes

Rabbitfur- brown tabby tom with amber eyes

White-ear- white she-cat with amber eyes,

Apprentice, Runningpaw

Breezecloud- smoky grey she-cat with blue eyes

Specklefur- grey she-cat with darker grey flecks

Sparrowclaw- brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Heatherbreeze- small white she-cat with blue eyes

Brightcloud- ginger and white she-cat with hazel eyes

Barkclaw- dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Queens: Crowfall- black and white she-cat with amber eyes (mother to Sparrowclaw's kits, Meadowkit, and Fallowkit)

Elders: Tinypatch- cream she cat with brown tabby patches, and amber eyes

Ashpaw's POV:

"Ashpaw! Ashpaw!" Ashpaw stumbled through the flaming forest. Through the haze of smoke, she could see Pebblepaw beckoning to her. She stumbled towards him, gasping for breath. "That's right, keep coming, your path is clear." She walked closer, every step forced, and heavy. Her breath came in rasps.

"Calm down, it's the smoke, you're almost safe, then you can be nice and warm, and healed, but for now, com towards me." Ashpaw panicked, she could hardly breathe, she could hardly think straight.

On the verge of defeat, Ashpaw, took slow steps towards Pebblepaw, Pebblepaw edged closer to her. She was almost there- she could see her target in sight.

Suddenly, there was a creak, and a flaming tree branch was swept to the ground with much force, causing the pile of sticks and grass to ignite. Pebblepaw leapt backwards, and was saved from the hungry, flames- Ashpaw, she wasn't as fortunate.

The fire rose, and then, a tuft of Ashpaw's fur caught fire. Ashpaw screamed so hard that her vocal chords hurt, leaving a raw, rasping sound. The sound split Pebblepaw's ears, and her flattened then, her cries still ringing in her ears, his face hot and raw feeling, as the fire spat embers out at him.

Ashpaw ran, screeching her raw, now raspy voice to StarClan. Please, please take me soon, the agony is too much, she prayed to StarClan.

And StarClan answered…

With a miracle…

Cold water hit her foot, and she dived into what was the river. There was an audible hiss as she hit the water, followed by instant relief. Her burns still hurt, even in the freezing water, but it sure beat having your fur lit on fire.

She lay motionless with relief in the river, slowly fighting consciousness. Her sides ached from lack of breath. Her paw struck something hard, and she pulled herself onto what appeared to be a log. At the surface, her burns stung, and white water lashed at her face, until she had swallowed a bunch of it. Then last thing that she thought before she lost consciousness was, kind of ironic that my name is Ashpaw.

A/N I need names for kit OC's, so here's the form:

Name:

Parents:

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