Hi, guys! This is my first fanfic on this site and I'm very open to critiquing and comments because I need it. I do not own Gravity Falls and in this story they're trying not to fall asleep which is kind of like this horror movie I'm pretty sure and anyway I don't own whatever movie that is.
"I just had 24 hours straight of visitors to the Mystery Shack and," Gruncle Stan breathes in deeply and tiredly before saying, "it was all totally worth it!" Stan grabs fistfuls of money out from his coat and laughs loudly. "Anyway, kids, I'm taking a nap. Wake me for dinner. And you," Gruncle Stan points at Waddles menacingly, "Don't you dare eat all my ice cream while I'm gone. Not again." He takes off up the stairs with dollar bills flying out from his fez.
Dipper and Mable are sitting on the floor watching another episode of "Ductective" and rubbing Waddle's belly. In the room over, Wendy yawns loudly and says, "Hey, guys, I'm pretty tired too, can I just crash here for a couple hours before I head home?"
"Yeah, of course!" Dipper answers quickly before his face turns red and tries to cooly reply, "I mean, yeah sure if you feel like it."
Wendy looks at him and chucles and then she throws her boots off and jump on the couch. Mabel turns her attention towards Soos who is sweeping up the gift shop and asks if Soos would like to stay. "No thanks, dudes, my abuelita is making cookies and I've been waiting all day to eat them. In fact," Soos looks down at his wrist as if there was a watch there before continuing, "my time has come." He immediately drops the broom and runs out the door yelling, "I'm coming for you cookies!"
Dipper and Mable, even though they aren't the only ones in the shack with Wendy on the couch, Ford in the basement, and Stan in his room, feel as if they are. Dipper thinks about which book he should read to take advantage of the silence, but the silence doesn't last long because Mable jumps on top of him and screams, "Extreme mini-golf championship in our room NOW!"
"Haha, okay Mable. I'll race you to the room!" And with that Dipper runs up the stairs.
Mable grabs Waddles and yells, "Waddles attack him!" Waddles takes a couple steps and lays down. Mable grabs her grappling hook and shoots it so it wraps around something upstairs that sounded like it was broken now, but Mable flys up the stairs and barely beats her brother. The Mystery Shack is full of laughter and golf balls and snoring, but everything feels just right to the Mystery Twins.
Meanwhile, in another dimension, Bill uncovered an object that had been hidden for centuries and he holds it up laughing, and laughing, and laughing.
Sorry, for the short chapter! I'll see if you guys like it and see if there's and critiquing and then, hopefully, continue on.