Un-standard disclaimer, The stupid guy does not belong to me,
he is property of his own mind, and we are borrowing him for our own uses,
until we see fit to return him to his idiotic existence.
Since he has seen fit to be an idiot in front of thousands of millions of people,
A fellow author reviews me and idiot guy
Shadow ... dude ... it's a poem not a story. It's not supposed to be in detail ..
unless the author wanted it that way. It's a p o e m. Obviously you failed to realize that.
Anywho .. That was awesome!!
I love poetry!! You better write more!! *adds to her fav story list*
A day in the life of "shadowman"
It was a typical day in idiot man's land, also known as his mind. He sat at his
computer contemplating
what he would do for his evening computer activities. Now considering idiot mans IQ
level, and hell just his name
I would think that it wouldn't be something too bright.
Sitting at his computer controls, sucking from the straw of his beer hat. He makes
some grunting noises as he turns
in his large puffy chair. It squeaks at the burden of the great weight upon it. The man
whom from now on we will call baka,
for sake of argument, sits reading numerous hentai fan fictions. He suddenly stumbles
upon A POEM called Forbidden love.
Seeing the big words together mad him automatically think, hentai, so he proceeded to
read it. He found that at the end he did
not like how the "story" not have any details, and not to mention the many words too
complex for his weak mind.
Immediately after reading the POEM baka decided to review this horrendous
piece of hentai fanfiction. Now after much
deliberation (yet another complex word) decided that this is what he should write.
Review: Sept 10th 2001, "this story
would have been better if it had been longer and in more detail". He pressed the signed
review button (much to the authors surprise)
and sent the review via fanfiction.net. How could he possibly have known the
repercussions. tsk tsk tsk.
Sitting across the world at a completely different computer, Genius (whom I shall
call, aah hell, me) was reading her reviews
for her first piece of fanfiction works ever. She falls over backwards laughing at
whatever is on the screen. What could it possibly be?
Baka's review, soon she is talking to the smrff chat room people, all 4 of them, at the
time. They come up with this idea, a plot for revenge
an evil scheme, well not really just a flame to a stupid response to a POEM not a story.
Soon typing away laughing gayily, at the wholehearted
stupidness of some people, type type type. Soon when all of the Ideas are compiled and
the story is written edited and finally sent we sent for
a response that our dear spandex clad super hero SHADOWMAN!!! super hero will come
save our non-humor filled days, and place another response to this great
literary art known as the first official flame fic.
*singing to spiderman theme... shadowman shadowman...da...da...da, shadowman!!*
Lots of fan love Chibi-chan
tasuki_suzakuseishi_gouka@yahoo.com
Co-written by/inspired by:
Finyda
Moonangl
&
Raq
he is property of his own mind, and we are borrowing him for our own uses,
until we see fit to return him to his idiotic existence.
Since he has seen fit to be an idiot in front of thousands of millions of people,
A fellow author reviews me and idiot guy
Shadow ... dude ... it's a poem not a story. It's not supposed to be in detail ..
unless the author wanted it that way. It's a p o e m. Obviously you failed to realize that.
Anywho .. That was awesome!!
I love poetry!! You better write more!! *adds to her fav story list*
A day in the life of "shadowman"
It was a typical day in idiot man's land, also known as his mind. He sat at his
computer contemplating
what he would do for his evening computer activities. Now considering idiot mans IQ
level, and hell just his name
I would think that it wouldn't be something too bright.
Sitting at his computer controls, sucking from the straw of his beer hat. He makes
some grunting noises as he turns
in his large puffy chair. It squeaks at the burden of the great weight upon it. The man
whom from now on we will call baka,
for sake of argument, sits reading numerous hentai fan fictions. He suddenly stumbles
upon A POEM called Forbidden love.
Seeing the big words together mad him automatically think, hentai, so he proceeded to
read it. He found that at the end he did
not like how the "story" not have any details, and not to mention the many words too
complex for his weak mind.
Immediately after reading the POEM baka decided to review this horrendous
piece of hentai fanfiction. Now after much
deliberation (yet another complex word) decided that this is what he should write.
Review: Sept 10th 2001, "this story
would have been better if it had been longer and in more detail". He pressed the signed
review button (much to the authors surprise)
and sent the review via fanfiction.net. How could he possibly have known the
repercussions. tsk tsk tsk.
Sitting across the world at a completely different computer, Genius (whom I shall
call, aah hell, me) was reading her reviews
for her first piece of fanfiction works ever. She falls over backwards laughing at
whatever is on the screen. What could it possibly be?
Baka's review, soon she is talking to the smrff chat room people, all 4 of them, at the
time. They come up with this idea, a plot for revenge
an evil scheme, well not really just a flame to a stupid response to a POEM not a story.
Soon typing away laughing gayily, at the wholehearted
stupidness of some people, type type type. Soon when all of the Ideas are compiled and
the story is written edited and finally sent we sent for
a response that our dear spandex clad super hero SHADOWMAN!!! super hero will come
save our non-humor filled days, and place another response to this great
literary art known as the first official flame fic.
*singing to spiderman theme... shadowman shadowman...da...da...da, shadowman!!*
Lots of fan love Chibi-chan
tasuki_suzakuseishi_gouka@yahoo.com
Co-written by/inspired by:
Finyda
Moonangl
&
Raq