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EDD HOUSE

Eddward Marion Vincent = Edd or Double D

6:30am First day of school September 9th, 2015

The house was silent except the ringing of an alarm clock. Edd opened his eyes and looked at his ceiling. He stared at the glow in the dark star shaped stickers and his miniature solar system hanging from his ceiling. Everything in his room was labeled and orderly from his rug to his star wars posters on his bedside wall.

Edd sat up quickly and yawned. He listened for any noise he can pick up. Birds chirping and his alarm clock. He picked up his phone to turn off the alarm.

"Oh DEAR! How careless of me. 6:33am! How absent minded of me. I must be prompt." Edd rose and made his bed before beginning his daily morning routine with some stretches a hot shower and getting dressed for school.

"First day of school how exhilarating! I can't wait to enthrall myself in advance curriculums. Oh how I can imagine the endless studies of chemicals, vocabulary, theories, stories, techniques, tests and so much more! Today will be splendid!" Edd excitingly said giving himself a prep talk in front of the mirror.

Edd wore his favorite knit sweater vest with a checkered print design and a button up underneath. Black causal jeans and original converse. He threw on his black beanie with two white stripes going along the sides on top of his jungle of hair. His hair was silky, thick, black and wavy. Such a shame he hides underneath his beanie. His skin pale and soft like a baby. He was scrawny for 5'5 and thin but he had hints of muscle. His eyes shined a bright blue.

He ran downstairs and spontaneously made himself an omelet worthy of a 5 star restaurant. When he was looking for ingredients he noticed the sticky notes on the fridge. On the sticky notes there was a list of chores and a message at the bottom xoxo mom and dad. He frowned.

"I'm sure Mother and Father are doing important work in Haiti. Hopefully they make it back for my birthday." Edd said.

Edds parents are doctors for the Red Cross. Edd lives off of money he receives every month from his parents to buy necessities like groceries. His parents get paid good money but the downside is that they work overseas for months on end. The last time Edd saw his parents was last year.

Being the neat freak that he is he made sure everything was clean and organized before leaving for school.

"7:00am how satisfying to be on time." He unlocked the front door. Turning around to take one last look at the empty house. "Have a good day at school." He whispered to himself with a hint of sadness. He sighed as he locked the front door and began to walk to school.

*From the cul-de-sac to Peach Creek HS walking distance was 25 minutes and driving distance was 5 minutes.*

KEVIN BART HOUSE

Kevin snores vibrated the room. His alarm went off. Wearing nothing but boxers he woke up startled. Checking his phone for the time. 7:00 Am. 15 more minutes. Hitting snooze he fell asleep instantly.

"KEVIN! KEVIN DEAR COME DOWN FOR BREAKFAST!" Mrs. Bart shouted from downstairs. She was dressed in her nurse uniform and had her red/orange hair tied up in a bun. She busied herself cooking pancakes. After 20 minutes and no sign of Kevin she went upstairs to check on him.

"KEVIN!" Mrs. Bart shouted barging into Kevin's pig pen called a room. Kevin mumbled and covered himself in his blankets as if he could hide. Mrs. Bart tiptoed around piles of clothes and books on the ground to reach Kevin. She ripped the blanket away from Kevin revealing half-naked self.

"KEVIN! WAKE UP! You will not be late ESPECIALLY on your first day of school. For goodness sake you're 17. You should be more responsible." Mrs. Bart shook Kevin until he sat up stretching and yawning. He has bedhead that looked like a nest. Rubbing his eyes he checked his phone. 7:20am

"Shit! You got to be kidding me school starts in 25 minutes. Goddamnit." Kevin got up and ran to the bathroom.

"Kevin watch your language! I'm leaving for the hospital. I'll try to come home early if not eat out today ok honey." Mrs. Bart said through the bathroom door. Kevin opened the door with a toothbrush in his mouth he nodded at his mom. Then he ran to his room for clothes. He rummaged through the piles of clothes smelling shirts.

"Diz shone shmells deezent." Nodding to himself he changed and went back to the bathroom to fix his hair. Checking his phone. 7:30am

"Shit. Shit. Shit. Shit. Shit." He struggled to find his backpack, sports bag, keys and sneakers. When he was ready to leave he stopped and started to panic.

"WHERE IS MY HAT?" He went back upstairs to grab a red baseball cap on his bedside table. He stumbled down the stairs and got in his truck. He raced out of the cul-de-sac in his crimson pick-up truck going 50mph leaving tire marks on the street.

$$ Ok so this chapter is kind of short but I'll upload ch.2 in no time! Leave a review it really helps~