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For those of you who read the first in this series 'Year 1' Jennifer, Rebecca, Cherie, Karen's friends and Ashley's friend Lily make few appearances. For those of you who really liked those people/pairings please let me know in your reviews and I'll write them in. Jennifer and Jesse are still together as are Rebecca and Evan and Louisa and Cherie. This story is mainly about Mandy's ED and Lia. It also contains abuse.
Ashley's 18, tom's 21, alexa's 17 as are rose, hannah and lily. kate;s 16, anna's 14. evan's 19. annabelle's 24.
Amanda
it was a warm sun. night in summer. My 15 yr. old twin sister louisa and I were arguing in the cold kitchen.
"You have to fukin eat amanda!" she said leaning forward.
She was in a yellow shirt and black pants.
"No. it's never amanda. And no I don't," I countered staying where I was.
"ok then you need to," she pulled back.
"I don't want to."
"I don't care if you don't want to. When was the last time you did?" she asked.
"Yesterday," I replied.
"I didn't see you eat," she said disbelievinglu.
"Doesn't mean it didn't happen."
"Actually it kindof does."
"So now you need proof that i'm eating? God you're not my manager," I said annoyed throwing my hands up.
And they fell back down.
"No I'm worried about you we all are," she said tilting her head and looking at me.
"No. Everyone's worried about Kate everyone's worried about kate dying. Not me," I said.
"Well she doesn't have a choice. *She* didn't choose cancer it chose her. You chose your thing," louisa said.
"No you're wrong. I didn't," I said not wanting to admit it.
"You forget that as your twin I can see right through you."
"why are being such a bitch?" I said talking w/ my hands.
"bc i'm tired of waiting for you to die," she answered also talking w/ her hands.
"would it be better if I did?"
she knew I had her there.
If she was tired of waiting for me to die. Then maybe she wouldn't have to. I wondered if we had milk in the fridge but decided to wait awhile. I also wondered what a cigerette tasted like.
