star's adventure
desclamer: i don't own pokemon but i do own star
bold means there talking
A boy named ash ketchum, dreamed to be a pokemon master. ash just woke up and ran to professor oak is lab and went off for this journey to be a pokemon master. two days after ash left pallet town. A girl named had old riped up clothing. Star has running from a Scyther who was attacking just kept running, mrs. ketchum sees scyther attecking star, mr. mime attcks stops and falls to the . k and takes star home. After star wakes up in ash is room, Star confused and softly says where i'm i? mrs k walks in the room your at my house, i found you running from a scyther, my name is mary ketchum. Star gets out of bed, smileslooks at her, thank you miss ketchum, i am star. Star looks a little sad. ms, k looks worried, then says whats wrong star? star looks at her clothes, talks softly my parents died when i was five, i have been living alone in the woods with pokemon, I am going to be 11 tomorow and i have no family .mrs k smiled, you can stay with me as long as you want. She huged star. Star huged back. thank you mrs k. ms.k took star to eat . star eats then after eating she goes to the mouring star woke up before anyone, starts mime comes out whats the smell? Star looks at him. My cooking mr. mime. mr. mime was shocked you can understand me? star smiles, softly says yea i mostly grow up with pokemon, i learned poketalk from them. smiles and eats her smiles. i also learned how to cook,clean,fight,make tents,make pokefood and find evolution stones. mr. mime smiled, then says well they are the best pokefood i have ever tasted star! star smiled, makes eggs ,bacon, hash browns and toast. ms. k comes,sees star's cooking on the table, wow star this looks great! star smiles, yea here this is a way to thank you for taking me under your care. ms. k smiles, gives her a gift. star here a gift for you.star opens it and it's a locket. star tears up. thank you ms ketchum the last gift i got was this. shows a pokeball and calls pikachu, this was my mom's pikachu comet, comet was my mom is first pokemon. comet is a girl, wearing a red flower. mrs. k sadly smiles at star. star thats sad, we will go for a walk to professor oaks lab. star nods ok, puts comet back in it's walked to professor oaks stops at the . k knocks on the door. oak opens the door. yes? ms k says, hi samul star needs her first pokemon, then smiles. oak smile and welcomes them in. star stares at her moms pokeball, wispers mom i miss you. miss k talked the prof oak on which she should have. oak kindly star how would you like a vulpix, growlth ,evee or cubone? star looked a little sad growlith would be nice wispers but i want a pikachu. star looks at growlth and smiles how would you like jake? growlth smiles i like that name. star smiles and takes jake's pokeball thnk you professor oak and mrs. k for everything. walks with mrs. k home.
star: huh? it's not done?
Sakura the wolfdemon princess: i know star but i needed to know if i really should continue it. sooo people tell me if i should continue it
star: bye please tell her what mistakes she made and how good it is, no flames please