A/N: This is the rewritten first chapter as I did not like how the first looked. So I hope second time's a charm. Also I would like to thank Williebadger618 for giving me pointers. I do not own Gravity Falls.


"You ready to head into the unknown?" Asked Dipper.

"Nope," replied Mabel sadly "let's go."

With that they entered the bus and left their favorite place on earth behind.


"Hey Dip do you think we should tell mom and dad about all our cool adventures?"

"Mabel you know everyone will think we're crazy, and even if they don't what happens when we tell them about Bill, they'd never let us go back."

"I guess you're right." Mabel's happy smile turned into a frown and she looked like she was about to go into sweater town.

"Hey what about all the good times we had, we can just cut out all the paranormal stuff. Like, we found a huge fish when we went fishing with Grunkle Stan, or that time we got a lot of candy on this made up holiday called Summerween."

"Yeah I can tell them that I got to meet a boy band, but I better not tell them I had about 20 packets of smile dip."

"Oh I remember that, you had a terrible headache and whenever I brought you some soup you started gnawing my hand. I think I still have teeth marks."

"I thought your hand was the paw of a candy dog!"

"Ha yeah sure. It's going to be a long trip home, we should get some sleep."

"Ok. Sweet dreams bro."

"Ha candy paw."

"What?"

"Uh sweet dreams."


"Last stop Piedmont, California. You have to get off here." The bus driver's voice came over the intercom.

"Dipper were home."

"Yeah… Home."

"Hey don't worry bro we'll always be together. Mystery twins?" She held out a fist.

"Mystery twins." Dipper gave her a fistbump.

"Welp let's go, mom and dad probably really miss us."

"Ok, don't forget Waddles."

"I wouldn't forget him if my life depended on it."

Dipper got up and thanked the bus driver while Mabel was trying to wake up Waddles. As he got off the bus he saw his parents and ran towards them to give them a hug.

But as he ran towards them a portal opened up right in his path.

"AHHHH! HELP!" Screamed Dipper as he fell through the portal.

"Hey where'd Dipper go" she then sees her parents traumatized faces, "what'd I miss"

And then everything went black as if it never existed in the first place.


Ok as I said before this is a rewrite of chapter one. Chapter two is in the works I thought I would just make this better.

So next time we will see what happened to Dipper after he fell through the portal. That should be sometime in the next week. It could be longer as next week I am going to camp. Well BYEEER!