My first post to the 10prompts LJ community.Yes, I like my crack, and this is one of the best crack pairings ever!
On a side note, I tried to give this one a little twist. I think this is a more realistic approach to the pairing (plus, I don't care to write about fluff that involves a member of an evil organization, though I may change my mind later and give it a shot.)
Constructive criticism is most welcomed! If you see any grammatical errors let me know, in case a few got past me when I looked it over. If any of you know of a good beta, please let me know!
Title: Tenten's First Kiss
Rating: PG-13 for violence
Prompt: Kiss
Word Count: 637
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or any of the characters
Like many teenaged girls, Tenten had dreamed of her first kiss for many years. She had played the scene like a sappy romance movie inside of her head over and over again. It would be just after they had gone on their first date, after they had made small talk about missions and the weather as he walked her home in the warm summer night. After a couple of shy good nights, they'd finally make eye contact. His eyes would be bright and beautiful, so much that he'd probably make her blush. Hesitant at first, the kiss would be sweet, innocent, and quick, as she figured most first kisses were. It would be extraordinary.
Instead, her first kiss was stolen forever to remain on the lips of a madman. Tenten had her back against a tree and she was sitting on the ground, drifting in and out of consciousness. The back of her head hurt from being thrown against the sturdy trunk, her skin was slightly scorched from the explosion. She licked her dry, severed lips clean of the grains of clay that stuck to them; a metallic, salty taste was strong in her mouth. Through blurred, spinning vision she noticed her enemy approaching her, standing over her like a tower. The design of crimson clouds against black that she had learned to fear and despise was now profound in her mind. Deidara said something that Tenten did not quite understand. He then knelt down in front of her, his self-satisfied, evil smile half hidden by the high collar of his cloak. He gently took her chin in his hand with feigned affection, forcing her to look into his eyes. Though Tenten's vision was beginning to blacken, she made eye contact. One of his eyes was a vibrant blue; the other was a cold, mechanical lens of a scope half hidden behind long yellow hair, making him look only partially human. She fought to keep her eyes open when he leaned in, determined to face her enemy and disguise her weakness.
Tenten felt a rough pressure that laggardly moved against her lips. Deidara's kiss was forceful and painful and it tasted like blood. All she could do was whimper meekly when she felt his tongue push hers, slimy and aggressive, assaulting her. It was hard to tell if his kiss was to destroy her emotionally or if he had just felt an animal need for it. When Deidara pulled back, Tenten's stomach began to churn when she saw that his lips were glistening and stained red with her blood. He reminded her of a wolf that had just finished gorging itself on a small lamb. Her mind screamed at her body to stand up and continue the battle, but the pain was dizzyingly heavy in her skull. Tenten gritted her teeth in disgust as Deidara brushed a stray lock of her brown hair away from her face, tucking it behind her ear. He gave her a sadistic sneer as if he knew about the precious, irretrievable thing he had just taken from her. He leaned in once more, this time his lips lightly pressing against her ear.
"It's intriguing, yeah, how much you're struggling for consciousness and yet still manage to keep so much hatred for me in your eyes," he muttered,"It's beautiful, yeah."
Tenten noticed him reach into the pouch at his hip. He held out a piece of clay in the palm of his hand, the mouth sliding forth its glutinous tongue to devour the clay. He closed his fingers into a loose fist and opened his hand again. Tenten's vision was too distorted to see what form it took, but it didn't take much deep thought to figure out what would come next. It was then she realized that she had finally been broken.
