Italics are thoughts just to let everyone know. Hope you enjoy!
Introduction-
Dickson Shopping Center
"Daddy! Don't hurt them!" Kimber was crying now. She was only six years old and had no idea what was happening. They were going shopping for a birthday present for her cousin, and now her father had a gun pointed at nine people.
"Close your mouth. Nobody needs to hear what you have to say." Josh needed his daughter to shut up; she was a headache. His plan was going all wrong, he just wanted one person, the one who ruined his life two years ago today.
Parking Garage
"I have eyes. Ten hostages on their knees in the food court, one appears to be a small child." Sam was doing okay until he saw her. She looked exactly like Sadie. He had a sudden need to rush into the shopping center and save her.
"What about the subject, Sam?" Greg was questioning Sam's judgement and he heard some hesitation in his voice when he mentioned the child. He has also been a little off for the past few days and had been pulling extra shifts.
"No joy. He is behind a pillar." Damn, I need to save her. Wait. Slow down. She isn't Sadie. We'll get them all out and I can go home to my little girl
Bang! Bang! Bang!
Three shots suddenly rang out from Josh's gun. Three people inside were down, including Kimber.
I know this is very short but it's my first fanfic and I'm having some trouble writing it. Please let me know what you think!