Kraiken: I do not own any of the Avatar characters, places or concepts (exept Kai who is basiced on myself)
Bare with me hear ti gets a lot better in chapter 2, Katara gets suduced and every thing it grate.
Chapter 1-The Flash
The Gang had pitched up on a hill within a small concealed area that Toph had scooped out for them. The day had gone without a hitch, they had covered many miles and had not come into contact with the fire nation with was luck seeing as they were still in the Earth Kingdom. There aim was the South Pole were they would plan there next move, what they do not know is that the sprits have other ideas.
"I feel odd" said Aang out of the blue running his hand though his newly formed hair.
"What do you mean" asked Katara.
"Avatar stuff" said Sokka immediately, not really paying attention.
"Is it" asked Katara looking back to Aang now concerned.
"It's a bit like when I meet Roku but different"
"How different" asked Toph who was amusing her self by sinking into the earth then out again on her back.
"Less familiar" he said, there was suddenly a blinding flash of light from the other side of the hill, the ground began to shack and everyone ran out see what was going on. On the other side of the mound a crater had opened up ten foot across and emitting a faint glow of light from within.
"What is it" screamed Sokka loosing all sence.
"A big hole in the ground" said Toph who could not see the light.
"It's beautiful" Katara said starring longingly into it.
Aang smiled, if a Katara wanted it he would get it "I'm going o have a look" he said looking shifty, he approached the edge of the crater disappearing over the side. Katara looked on worriedly, there was a moment's pause then "Guys come look at this" called Aang.
"What is it Aang" called Katara jumping over the edge, she gasped.
"What is it" called Sokka.
"Who is it" said Toph, she did not need to move she could feel him from hear though she still curios.
Aang looked down at the unconscious form before him, the young hansom man could be know older than 18 but Aang looking into has face was shore that he recognised him though he was certain that he had never seen him before!
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