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Crucifix

Based on the twilight series

Chapter 1

Second chance

Jonathans POV

My life has never really worked out. My name is Jonathan Blake. My life is has been like one you would hear on a commercial to sponsor a child. My dad left when I was 4 and my mom committed suicide two years later. This left me and my sister, Anna, to fend for ourselves. She was 10, I was 6. We were taken into foster homes and separated. I still don't know where she is. My foster mother was decent but the father was a wreck, he would come home drunk every few days and beat both myself and my mother. As soon as was able, I got out of there, I was 14 when I left home. I got a job at a fast food restaurant to pay for food and other things. I kept going to school until I was finished with high school. Needless to say, I could not afford college, and since I wasn't the best student, I didn't have even a partial scholarship. So, I ended up an alcoholic.

Lucy's POV

My name is Lucy, I am a vampire. Not in the technical sense (I don't bite humans, only animals, as do the rest of my "family") I was returning from car shopping with my brother, Jett (yes that is his name) I had decided on a hot pink Ferrari Enzo and I was driving it off the lot, but, our route home took us through a bad section of Chicago. We were driving in relative silence, rare for Jett as he was changed at 14 years old and he was absolutely insane. "Do you think the others will like it?" "How could they not?" Jett replied in a false angered tone "It's pink!" he didn't like pink. We drove past a filthy looking bar and Jett happened to look across the street and what did he see? "Look! Lucy, Lucy! That guy is getting mugged!" "I find your enthusiasm at the subject very disturbing." I said, until I realized he wasn't kidding. "Oh my god! Stay here Jett, I' m going to try and break it up!" I yelled "aww but I wanna come!!" Jett pleaded "not the time Jett" and at that I jumped out of the car.

Jonathan's POV

Not my day. I couldn't pay my ever mounting tab at my usual bar and the owner just happened to have mob connections. Apparently my tab added up to about 10 grand and I was paying for it the hard way. All of a sudden the guys pounding on me were thrown into various objects like rag dolls. In their place was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen. She had shoulder- length brown hair with red highlights on the tips, perfect pale-white skin and freckles and deep gold eyes. Wait. Gold? Is that even possible? She walked up to me with an almost inhuman grace and knelt by my side "I'm so sorry for what I have to do, but you are dying and it is necessary" her voice had a sing- songy quality to it and was, like the rest of her, absolutely perfect. She leaned in, as if to kiss me, but she went for my neck instead. I realized a second before she did it what she was doing. "Wait ple-"was all I could get out before she sank her teeth into my neck. I felt an odd burning sensation in the place where I was bitten before I lost consciousness.

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