Hey guys!
So this is my first fanfiction. English is not my first language, so sorry for the grammar mistakes.
Lorens pov:
I am soo nervous right now. This is my first day at Brown and tonight I'm gonna meet Eddie. Eddie and I met last year on facebook and started chatting and we became really good friends. We haven't meet yet, because he is from LA and I'm from New York, but he got accepted on Brown last year, and I got accepted this year. It means he is one year older than me. OMG Loren chill. He is just a guy. No big deal. We shared everything. When we were happy, sad, lonely or just needed someone to talk to. I even told him about my dad…
Right now I was on my way to my room. I was excited to meet my roommate. I found my room, number 362, and slowly opened the door…
Person: OMG hi I'm Mel, you must be Loren! We are gonna have such a great year, it's gonna be epic!
Loren while shaking hands: Hi
Mel: We are gonna be such great friends!
The rest of the day Mel used to walk me around campus, and show me the school. She was actually a great person, and very open about her personal life. She likes pizza and her favorite color is everything neon. She was a sophomore so I couldn't help myself asking…
Loren: Do you know Eddie Duran?
Mel: Three words… Hot, sexy and Greek God!
Loren: Mel that's four words
Mel: Whatever! He is hot! Why do you ask?
Loren: Umm… I'm sort of meeting him tonight…
Mel: WHAT?!
Eddies pov:
I'm gonna meet Loren tonight. I've never been so nervous in my life. I don't know why. I just really wanna see her. I wonder how she is. I bet she is beautiful. I were so lost in thought I almost walked right into a wall
Ian: What is wrong with you today man? You're acting really weird man.
Eddie: Sorry. I just… have a lot on my mind.
Ian: Who is she and how did you guys meet?
Eddie: How did you… never mind. Her name is Loren and we met on facebook about a year ago, but we never met in person. Today is her first day at Brown and we are gonna meet tonight. It's not a date! It's a… friendly dinner.
Ian: Aha… friendly dinner?
Eddie: Yeah, I mean it's not like a date or something just… two friends eating and talking…
Ian: Sureeeee… let's go to starbucks, I'm dying for some coffe.
Lorens pov:
Later that day
Mel: Soo when is the date?
Loren: Mel it's not a date
Mel: Yeah you keep saying that but no one believes it
Loren: At 7. We are gonna meet out in the main entrance. Mel help me I only have an hour and I have nothing to wear!
Mel walked to my closet and found a beautiful black hi-low dress with a bright pink belt, and black wedges. She winked at me…. I sighed
Loren: Mel I'm not gonna wear that
Mel: Come on.
She went on her knees and begged me. I sighed again and nodded. She squealed and jumped op and down. I put on my outfit and she did my hair in wavy curls, and my makeup light. When it was 6:45 she practically pushed me out the door.
Mel: Have fun!
The clock is now 7:05. I've been waiting in 15 minutes. I was stupid thinking that he would come. Stupid and naïve. I sighed and decided that I should just go home, when I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around…
Eddies pov:
I were late. I were running down the stairs down to main entrance. I just hope she is there. That she isn't blowing me off. I slowed down when I reached the main entrance and saw a person standing there. She turned around. My first thought:
I were right. She is beautiful.
Okay, what do you guys think of first chapter? Please R&R i would love to hear it.